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| "Festival Under The Stars" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought overall it was very sweet.
| Reviewed By: Silverback [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 05:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed your fanfic very much. As a fan of YKK, it was exciting to see someone else take this much interest in the story. Thanks for putting all the time and work into creating this and I plan to peruse some of your other works. :) Psssst. "...to make ends meat..." (meet) "...Traditional wears (wares?) being sold." The words sound the same and are technically correctly spelled, but I think you may have been going for a different meaning. If not, my apologies.
| Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: Pahhur [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 20:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Alright, this is overall pretty good. There are some well conceived concepts floating around. However, there are a lot of things that aren't necessary, where you're restating something you've already said once before. Aside from stuff a beta could fix, this is the major problem. (You say the same phrase twice really close.) This is a very good read, and thanks for submitting to FFARG, you FFARGer.
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