| "Test" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: test
Reviewed By: babybisser [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2010 00:30 CST
Comment/Review:
u should write more to "Test". i think its good
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Title: More than a little disgusted
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2009 15:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, Yoko was a cruel demon, but he was never a brute nor a savage. How does testing loyalties include beating and raping someone? That's disgusting. And all because he wanted to make sure she'd really loved him? No. There's no potential is this type of story. The basis of "love" is weak/too open to interpretation. This seemed more like an excuse to paint Yoko as the "horrible, unrepentant demon". *sigh* It's always one extreme or another with you guys. Don't even get me started on the original character you created that I'm guessing is supposed to e Kagome. This is an original 'story'.
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2008 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice- I see a lot of potential with this and would love to see it continued. No pressure but this could go a lot of different directions.
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Reviewed By: Lai Lai On: November 18, 2008 19:36 CST
Comment/Review:
since when do you need to test your love to someone and you forced yourselve on someone. it was ok sorta sad
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Reviewed By: ujak On: November 10, 2007 11:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it please update this story even a little along with Kitsune Politics and mother!!!
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Reviewed By: VB On: March 16, 2007 11:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
I want to read this one. I think it has a lot of potential. It wasn't disappointing that Kitsune was a sibling, but I really had hoped you would write another that was a romance.
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Reviewed By: blkwolf1 On: March 14, 2007 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes please write this story!!! It seems like its gonna turn out realy good!!! ja ne
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Reviewed By: yokokagluvr On: November 04, 2006 21:25 CST
Comment/Review:
hey...i read ur Kitsune one-shot and was deeply moved....and dissapointed that it wasnt a romance....but loved it nonethe less!!...i think u should continue this story, its really heart-warming....the ending wanted me to cry...so UPDATE SOON PLZ!
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Reviewed By: Kira_demon(nli) On: September 02, 2005 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okiii who knew Youko's youkai would do that??? it's a little scary to think of, but the plotline is brilliant, simply brilliant..... So plz*holds up emty plate, HUGE puppy pout with the trembeling lip, big watery eyes everythin* seconds plz..... huggels and kisses Kira_demon
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