| "Ugly" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
| Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] |
Reviewed By: anf600 (Toni) On: April 15, 2010 23:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting AU - notice you updated after a long, dry spell so I hope you keep it up a mite more frequently. Is D's family so poor they can't take him to a dermatologist? Cause it is surprising they don't find something to help.
|
Reviewed By: cewo On: March 29, 2010 18:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
So, sometimes they do come back......Happy Birthday! This was a treat to see; it was always one of my favorites and I was saddened when it seemed to be permanently abandoned. Real life always seems to get in the way of finishing fics but I sure hope to see more soon! Thanks
|
Title: . . .
Reviewed By: KuboTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2010 16:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow 5 years @_@ its so weird, considering it feels like i read this story not so long ago. This is one of the fics that just seems to stick with me (and i actually check if it updates every few months :S) I have absolutely no idea if the author would actually receive this review or not but if you do. I always loved this story, tho i sort of gave up on ever reading its ending :) thanks anyway :)
|
Title: history
Reviewed By: KuboTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2010 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow 5 years @_@ its so weird, considering it feels like i read this story not so long ago. This is one of the fics that just seems to stick with me (and i actually check if it updates every few months >.
|
Title: A year 2 late
Reviewed By: Alea On: February 25, 2009 08:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey O.O, couldnt believe it when i saw you actually updated a chapter. Even if its a year 2 late in revieuwing, thanks :) I'm not sure youre going to see this revieuw but still ^.~ Great work :)
|
Reviewed By: ZaKai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 10:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like the imagery you have in this chapter. I'm really able to imagine how things must look, smell, and feel. Very nice. It's good to see thatyou have another chapter up. Wish I had time to beta for you... :(
|
Title: Nice job
Reviewed By: CircleKV0012 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 01:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really enjoy your story. So now Hilde has entered the picture, I wonder what role she will play? I am excited to see how relationships develop espcailly trowa's and quatre's and Heero's and Duo's. And is Duo going to get hsi acene removed? You keep hinting at it. I hope he does and soon.
|
Reviewed By: theaprilbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 02:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh! I just stumbled across this fic (I've been reading GW fanfics like crazy for awhile), and it's great! :) I hope you're planning on continuing it. I feel so sorry for Septum, and Duo too.
|
Reviewed By: Alea On: May 12, 2007 12:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Im very glad that you havent completly abandoned it yet, so i quess i have been waiting anyway so longer wont be a problem :) Take you time :)
|
Title: response
Reviewed By: Miss Shepherdess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 15:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmm.. Maybe I can do this once, since I'm not going to make a habit out of it... Yes, this is Miss Shepherdess answering to Alea and others. Yes, I know how the fic will end and I know what will happen in it, but writing a fic also takes a certain mood to be in. I have to really relate too my characters, or otherwise I'm just writing crap, and I don't want to do that. The feelings that Duo feels are sometimes very depressing, and I have been too tired from work and school to be able to handle that. So, perhaps I will continue this fic when I have more energy for it. Thank you for reading anyway, everyone who did, everyone who will. :) You guys make me immensely happy.
|
Reviewed By: Alea On: April 30, 2007 19:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Why havent you continued this fic?
|
Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 15:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awww. I was doing a happy little jig thinking you'd updated. Nevermind, this adoring fan will continue to wait for as long as you need, so just take your time Jania ^_^.
|
Reviewed By: chantygal [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 10:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
neat story........very different to what I'm used to so i'm very intrigued. Keep writing.Keep updating.
|
Reviewed By: Nishii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 04:57 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
WOw, i really love your writing style, you definatly have a knack for really capturing that out of place adolcence feeling very well, you almost made me feel like i was in high school again just reading it. YOur grasp on human emotions make this a very pleasant in depth read, and i definatly love the angsty relationship thing you have going with everyone. And i would love to see a wonderfully long lemon in here somewhere to, but that is really my hentai side speaking. My only critism, and this is only because you said you wanted it, is that sometimes you need to go more into depth with the enivormental details, the last chapter especially had me lost, and wondering what was going on, and then you solved it but while it was happening it would have still been suspenful to have a grasp on the situation. I think your problem is the same one i've had, where in my mind i know what is happening but sometimes i neglect to put it into writing. An unbiased read can usually catch it before uploading. Also in serveral points you introduce things that have great potenial for become whole stories on the own and then end them abruptly, it may be better to fully develop one plot and work it to the max, than have twenty different plots which never get fully explored, it almost feels like you had alot of different ideas for this story and couldn't pick one to expound upon so you chose all of them. Not that i am complaing, like i said before i really, really enjoyed reading this, and you have definatly got me hooked, but as a so-so writer myself i thought i would give my opinion. Even if it is of little use. Please keep writing, i absoltly can't wait to read more, and i love where this is headed. Did i mention i am awed by the very simple but effective way you chose to explore Duo's emotional side without the ligthheartedness his looks usually warrent. very ingenous The always long winded- and never spell checked, Nishi
|
Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 16:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Right, if that had been me in the cellar, I'd have done a runner as soon as a gush of wind crept across my neck. I mean, there aren't any windows are there... ooohhh... *laughs* that line about Duo being the mental patient was funny. Yes! Heero and Duo progress, now we're getting somewhere. Uh... okay.. have read a bit further and realised that Duo ran away... so maybe not as much progress as I thought. lol. But it WILL happen. Holds up fist in determination. Realises she isn't the writer. Pixie shakes fist at Jania and tries to look suitably threatening. It WILL happen. *laughs again*.
|
| Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] |
