| "Crimson rose petals..." Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Roselite [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2002 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! It was really beautiful!! How did you come up with it? ^_^ ^_- |
Reviewed By: LadyJessy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2002 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm . . . interesting, but very confusing. It has potential though. I always love stuff that has to do w/ Crystal Tokyo. However, there is such a thing as too much sublty. You can't be obscure throughout the WHOLE story. It confuses people and i'm deffinitly confused (i'm still not sure what the point of the story is). All these metors and bright red lights and stuff. i had no idea what was happening. With a little revision, though, i think you could clarify alot of stuff and still make the story sound mystical and keep the "voice" of the story. Good job and keep on writing! :) |
Reviewed By: Jehosi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2002 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this. ^_^ It is very poetic and beautiful. Hopefully there will be more like it soon. |
