| "The Fate of True Love" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
Reviewed By: Azkis Killer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i saw your update on the story Let Me Love You and couldnt help but write this. If you want to read my story you know how to get to it! please tell me what you think!!! you can e-mail me at anl2u@comcast.net it you want to say anything. or just write a review/comment. Its going under a redo but noting major. The chapters will say the same things just in a different format. Thanks for taking the time to read this i appreacate it!!!!!^.^
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 19:45 CST
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i like your fanfic, really interesting... i love to write you but i have hotmail and you have yahoo so anyway heres my email in case you have any way in which you can write me soy_la_batichicac@hotmail. com
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Title: Your story
Reviewed By: Angel384090 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story. Keep updating, thanks. ANGEL
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 14:20 CDT
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please updaqte soon! i love it. its off to a great start. end the cliffy!
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Reviewed By: Miroku's Sango On: September 22, 2005 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it!! Please continue!!!
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Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Anubis-Chan here! I like your fic so far! It's entertaining and leave me wantin' more! thanks for reading my fics, and I'm glad I'm reading yours! Keep up the good work! ^_^ Much love Anubis
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements (not logged in) On: August 19, 2005 15:48 CDT
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Wow, it was gettting really good. Please stop the cliffy, must know what happenend next!
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Reviewed By: chicken_lil On: August 17, 2005 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm i like it... so itz a kouga kag rite?... sry i didn't read da summary @_@ ... but anywho... i like it.... itz cute... just move it a lil slower thou... and describe a lil more...d atz it... and thnx for reviewing my story..btw.. i haven't loged in yet so yea.. i'm just using chicken lil as a nick.. i'm aido... writer of 'secrets'
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Title: Nice Try
Reviewed By: Plasticperfect [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Hey, sorry it took me so long to review but I've been a little busy. Anyway, you have a good story, just work on it a little more. I have a few suggestions, if you want to keep going with it. First try to make your chapters a little longer,descriptions are always a plus. Second, you might want to get a beta reader, I'd be happy to help you. And lastly, keep it up, I know it can be discouraging at times, but just keep writing for yourself first and foremost. Good luck! My email is sotran86@yahoo.com if you feel like sending me some of your stuff.
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Reviewed By: KoolNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 23:39 CDT
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I really like the story But you could add some things to make it better but I'm not not one to talk
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Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 00:01 CDT
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great story, but you could be a little more descriptive. I know I have no right in commenting your work when mine is a pile a crap, but all I'm saying is to describe the scene and character movements to create a imagination for your readers. Anyways, great story and I wish you luck and prosperity. ^_^!
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Reviewed By: angelabovefaith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 20:32 CDT
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Its a good start though it seems a little rushed, try adding some thought and express feeling more. Making chapters longer wouldn't hurt. Do this and you will have a great story! I hope you update real soon!
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Reviewed By: dadslttleangel13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 13:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey great story keep writting it i look forword to reading.
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Title: kool
Reviewed By: che lee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i likt this story vary much up date soon
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Title: The Fate of True Love
Reviewed By: kappei_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 09:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting start. You had a few grammar errors but nothing serious at all (we all have errors me especially). Lots of dialogue and the plot was good. I think that if you add a little more discription to the story it would help it come across a little better but it's really good. Maybe think about writing the character's thoughts in italics and showing how the characters feel about the situation more. I liked it and I will continue to read as long as you keep writing! Overall is was wel done! :)
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Reviewed By: funnygrl812 On: July 25, 2005 13:24 CDT
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I think your story is very good so far please hurry and write the rest of the story.
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