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Reviewed By: rhc reader On: September 17, 2009 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy crap... that was awesome! and sad! (that link in the other chapter didnt work btw) i dont usually like stories like this, but darn you you have serious talent! i saw there was a sequel and i shall go read that now... though you killed everyone off i wonder where else you could go...
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Reviewed By: rhc reader On: September 17, 2009 16:56 CDT
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i knew this would happen. i knew it would. cant' have a fic centering the bad guys without killing off the good guys. poor everyone! :is afraid to click the next chapter but must do so: somehow i know it wont be nicer to kagome
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Reviewed By: rhc reader On: September 17, 2009 16:54 CDT
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ok. you are forgiven for killing off fluffysama only because that chapter was awesome. and the action was awesome. and it was just plain awesome. thanks for at least letting HIM die with dignity
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Reviewed By: rhc reader On: September 17, 2009 16:52 CDT
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YES naraku is DEAD! too bad the actual series cudn't accomplish that. nononononono not fluffysama! :cries:
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Reviewed By: rhc reader On: September 17, 2009 16:51 CDT
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is it bad i was hoping for a hot steamy lemon in that chapter? yay for sada and bankotsu being a official couple!
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Reviewed By: rhc reader On: September 17, 2009 16:49 CDT
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wow :0 happy she's officially with the band... kind of sad that kikyo died so painfully, but very very entertained. i mite have to find that two-faced fiction after i'm done with this and its sequel :)
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Reviewed By: rhc reader On: September 17, 2009 16:46 CDT
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:) i sense sparks between sada and bankotsu--evil evil man but so yummy... second yummiest to jakotsu :goes off to next chap:
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Reviewed By: rhc reader On: September 17, 2009 16:43 CDT
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ok. sada is a bad person and she broke my heart when killed the kiddies... but i CANT STOP reading this :-0
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Reviewed By: rhc reader On: September 17, 2009 16:28 CDT
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she... she killed the... teh poor orphans!
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Reviewed By: rhc reader On: September 17, 2009 16:25 CDT
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... sada is... not very nice is she? x_x
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Reviewed By: rhc reader On: September 17, 2009 16:22 CDT
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your talent is amazing. ignoring the placing of the talking bits, its awesome. i never saw a story written from the perspective of the bad guy b4. keep pushing the envelope suki!
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Reviewed By: rhc reader On: September 17, 2009 16:20 CDT
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ooo urasue... not a good thing. well short or not its interesting so far im going to read away :-)
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Title: To Shorty
Reviewed By: suki_moon_princess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 14:52 CDT
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I have A New Obsession on here. Just click on my profile and look at my stories. It's there. It's not on the search though. I dunno why. I hope you check this. I can't get ahold of you any other way.
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Reviewed By: SHORTYwithaSHORTtemper On: August 19, 2006 12:43 CDT
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HI its shorty. i was banned from ff.net for SUPPOSEDLY FLAMING people. so now ff.net can KISS MY ASS i looked up A NEW OBSESSION on here to see if you were on mm.org. apparently u r, but if u ar NOT bloodlustmistress u ar STEALING an should rot in hell. i didnt find a NEW obsession BUT I found the other one. I want YOU to POST IT on here so I CAN REVIEW IT because FF.NET SUCKS dick.
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Title: MangaFreak
Reviewed By: LiLaZnDrEaMeR [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, yes, it's me again. LoLz...don't worry, I won't bother after this anymore. *cough* Lies! *cough* ^^ Again, there were some spelling and grammar stuff that picked away at my sanity...however, it was still enjoyable and I liked it alot! I liked how the whole story was from her point of view and how she just wanted to kill everyone because they got in her way of planning things. Haha...awesome chick, by the way. Anyways, I loved it! ^^
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