| "Punishment of the Innocent" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: haha.
Reviewed By: doki_doki_chan On: July 03, 2006 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know what would have been intresting? if a nurse or doctor had walked in on that. i can imagine! hahahahahahahahahahahahaha! seriously. thats probably what would have happened if he was at a real hospital. :D
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Reviewed By: Yoru no Haru On: April 16, 2006 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the style of writing. It was pretty good. The spelling and grammar (very very important to me) was excellent. The originality and creativity, was...a bit lacking though. There are pretty much a lot of BDSM about Akito and Hatori or Ayame. But...i like the fact that you changed how the manga went, and made it so Ayame stopped Hatori from being further hurt. I can't say this was exactly 'fun' to read (i'm not a sadist), but...it was interesting. I liked it. Overall, i give this a 9 out of 10.
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Reviewed By: yamikitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 16:59 CST
Comment/Review:
I think you should continue. I like this story a lot. It's very sweet. I want to know what happens to Hatori and Ayame next!
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Reviewed By: Shemai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter too! ^.^ I don't know if you should continue this particular one, it seemed like a pretty definate ending, but I'd love to see more things with this couple or more fics like this! It was great! ^.^ Thank you!
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Title: Oh! Forgot!
Reviewed By: Shemai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 07:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry! Forgot to attach this to the first review!
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Reviewed By: Shemai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 07:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my God! That nearly made me cry! I really really wanna see Hatori make it up to him! Please post the next chapter! I have to know what happens! Please!
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