| "Chibi Iruka" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: santa_is_a_pedophile On: March 07, 2010 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story so far. I hope your going to write more soon. Also you should most definitely make it kakairu. i would be funny to read about kakashi starting to get feelings for iruka when he is so young and has been able to learn about iruka more than when he was an adult. And it will be funny to read about a young iruka crushing on kakashi even more now that he is younger and will have no problem admitting it to his self like it seemed like he does when he was older (I got this from your summary and when he said he wasn't jumping in front of kakashi for kakashi). But by the by GREAT JOB so far and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for sharing this story also.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2006 19:17 CST
Comment/Review:
I like it its a new idea update soon cant wait to see what hapoens!
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Reviewed By: karuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 22:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good so far. It is a bit fast-paced, but I'd like to see where you go with it. Please continue!
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