Reviewed By: Yoko Oro [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting writing style! This ficcie was like watching the anime. The only difference is that you get to see what goes on in Kenshin's head. You don't really get to know what Kenshin is thinking in the anime series, with the exception of a few key moments. In all of these moments, he is battling with himself, like in your story. You portrayed the characters very well and in character. In the true spirit of Watsuki-san, you made the story serious and dramatic with a scene of random comic relief at the end. And I love how you portrayed Sanosuke's friendship with Kenshin!
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