| "A Brother's Love" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 11:14 CST
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Wow, that was amazing. Poor Aya-san. Akito has a tendancy to make bad situations even worse... But like Ryoko-onee mentioned, Yuki wouldn't have found out unless he was as mean as he is. *sigh* So that's one good thing he's done. I like the fact that you've taken a different character to focus on. That inspires me. *stares dreamily at the sky* Seriously, it does. I'm starting my first ever Furuba fic and it's gonna be an odd pairing. And by odd I mean completely and utterly insane. But I think it's adorable. *sigh* That's just me in a nutshell. Well, I can't wait to read more of this story! Ja ne and happy writings! ~Tori-chan~
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Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had been waiting for this for a wile, so I was very glad to read it. It could have changed scenes a bit smoother, but it was still awesome. Thank goodness for Akito's cruelty- else Yuki'd never find out.@_@
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Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 01:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was agreat chapter and I truly felt moved for Aya. -hugs him- I just can't tell you how much I'm waiting for the next part. Write soon ne. ^^
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Reviewed By: animefreak749 On: August 30, 2005 20:14 CDT
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OMG!!! i luv this!! please update soon!! (i really hope it's a yuki n tohru but it seems like a kyo n tohru...)
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great! update again soon please!
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i love it! I love you! please please PLEASE update again soon! I'm dieing to know what happens! ^__^
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Reviewed By: animefreak749 On: August 05, 2005 21:19 CDT
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NNOOOOO!! IT'S A CLIFFHANGER!!! Please update soon?
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Reviewed By: Shintotchi On: August 02, 2005 02:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I. Love. You. This is the first Ayame-cenetered fic I have seen in my long search and you don't know how much I love you for it. Please don't stop writing on this. I can't wait to see what happens nect!
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