Reviewed By: Yamiace1321 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 11:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey! just came across this fic, and I have to say that it was a reat first chapter! I mean, I have loads of trouble with my first chapters still, but you got straight into it! Please keep gooing with this, cause I think that it's really good, and the storyline is a good one too!
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