| "A Light In His World Of Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: kaglover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 13:56 CDT
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Great fic like from all the fics you had wrote. But I think kagome being the the companion of Inuyasha is a little too early especially on the first chapter. I think there should be more things before that happens. Over all, it's pretty good and keep up the good job!
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Reviewed By: kaglover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 13:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great fic like from all the fics you had wrote. But I think kagome being the the companion of Inuyasha is a little too early especially on the first chapter. I think there should be more things before that happens. Over all, it's pretty good and keep up the good job!
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Reviewed By: Anaki On: August 07, 2005 21:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
I agree with Silver, this is very good.
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Reviewed By: Silver Angeliss-nsi On: July 28, 2005 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmmmm yummy. This is perfect as a oneshot...no need to do a sequel. Let us readers imagine what adventures they'll go on together.
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