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"Before Artificial Human" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]
 Reviewed By: Lord Spikeo  On: January 18, 2002 21:55 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Story is nicely done,it was well written and I think well thought,bravo.

Not to be picky but 18 never really did anything really bad,she never caused that much trouble except destroy buildings,while 17 on the otherhand was trying to run over people with a car.LOL!

The story makes Android 18 look way better then Android 17,this is not for Android 17 lovers.(I'm a bit of a Android 17 fan so :|!!!!!)

Overall though this is a way better then average story.To any stories out there,t is really hard to get a 9 or a 10 from me though.8 though is pretty hard though to,but not as hard.

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