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Title: OCD rant
Reviewed By: DeathPaladin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, you porbably don't care, but I'm OCD about stuff like this, so here goes... Kyubi is a If you read OR know ANY of the legend of the Biju, you'd know that, besides being literally omnipotent and King of Biju, Kyuubi represents the FIRE ELEMENT. He has a FIRE SEAL on his body hat gives him INFINITE CHAKRA. Since I tend to copy&paste fics I like to Word so I can enjoy themat my leisure...I fied it in my document. But please, PLEASE try to actually do research on Biju before giving them random, made-up elemental affinities, huh? (I recommend the fic "Biju" on Fanfiction.net under the "Naruto" section; it's a directory/information on all nine Biju that the author found on-line somwhere). I apologize if I'm sounding harsh. Drop me an e-mail if you can; if you see my e-mail address with the review, fine; if not, it's thedemonetrigan@yahoo.com.
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Title: 6
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FANTASTIC chapter!!! oh man, very very interesting! I really enjoyed it. THANKS:D
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Title: 5
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 13:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really really HATE Orochimaru and strongly dislike Sasuke! Oh man, I can't wait for BOTH of them to get their asses handed to them. I mean if Naruto is stronger than Kyuubi was then that should just be all sorts of interesting NO?! Thanks:D
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Title: 4
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 13:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was a GREAT chapter and he gave up the possible chance of being Kage in Shadow for the almost non exsistent chance of possibly being Kage in Leaf....Interseting...
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Title: 3
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 12:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
He's got all 9 tales now?! SWEET!!! very very interesting. I cna't believe that Sasuke is such a JERK, then again, nevermind, YESm I CAN believe it:D
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Title: 2
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 12:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh man when Naruto lost his body that freaked me out but I'm glad to know that he is going to get one again! Can't wait to see how he looks like now! >:D
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Title: 1
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 12:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
what a way to end it! Oh man, Sasuke is such a B@ST@RD!!! Massive GRR!!!
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Title: grrr
Reviewed By: Fenikkusu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Though your story has a lot of potential and good material...I have trouble reading it through all of the spelling and gramatical errors..Again, I am not trying to be mean, I like where your fanfic is going, but you really need to have someone else edit your fanfic, it is really hard to find your own errors.
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Title: i love your story! >.
Reviewed By: edens chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cannot believe you only have one review! i absolutly adore this fic you are writing! i love the story plot and ive been spending the past few weeks since your last update checking back and waiting for an update! this is a really interesting story and i wanna read more! so keep on writing! and dont let a lack of reviews pull you down.. if it is at all.. and i love you since you are an author that actually updates unlike others... keep writing! ill wait another month for the next chapter! ^_^
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Reviewed By: chibigokan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 05:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
your story is pretty interesting, and a good idea for a first fic; though you have some spelling errors like "dieing" is actually "dying". keep it up.
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