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| "Hot Dogging" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 18:37 CDT
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typo in last review: "wrath", not "rath".
| Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 18:36 CDT
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Oh, my God. I haven't laughed like that in a long time. It's so refreshing to see a Nemu/Ishida fic of this quality; normally, they're either angst-filled one-shots or tiny PWPs. Keep up the good work. :) P.S. If you don't update soon, my Renji chibi will feel my rath.
| Reviewed By: LIQUIDCELLZ On: September 06, 2005 04:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're my new best friend. That was hilarious!
| Reviewed By: Unimportant On: August 17, 2005 13:42 CDT
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Hm, it appears MediaMiner strips paragraph breaks. I apologize for the incredibly massive hunk of text that is my previous review. It probably isn't worth attempting to read, and is truncated before some of the important stuff in any case. A long story short: I would like to see more.
| Reviewed By: Unimportant On: August 14, 2005 17:30 CDT
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I have not given any ratings, because my direct comments will probably be more valuable (if any of this has any value). Forgive me if this rambles or seems presumptuous (the latter is unintended). Also forgive my overuse of parenthetical statements. First off, I must admit that I'm probably not the typical type of person who reads these stories. Most sexual humor is only considered funny because people find it uncomfortable, and I find it neither. Also, I'm not terribly impressed by today's humor writing in general. I say this only because it shows that my interest in your story overcomes some natural obstacles (and I have actually checked for updates, and I tend to drop stories quickly). As to something that could actually be called comments: A few general notes: I did find this somewhat funny and well-written, even if my comments make it seem otherwise. Also, are you a fan of Hitsugaya? I liked your flippant treatment of the premise. Most pairing stories don't make chronological sense or use ridiculous gimmicks; making fun of this is a good touch. This next note is incredibly trivial, but I should note that if Ichigo could overcome Aizen's as-of-yet-unexplained power, Kenpachi wouldn't be nearly as terrifying. I have few comments regarding chapter 2, except to say that its first scene had some good moments. Chapter 3: Rukia's musings at the beginning contain good humor writing. Also, while Hanatarou is not exactly hilarious, his occasional appearances are rather amusing. Th |
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