Title: ...er...how can I be nice...?
Reviewed By: milady17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not being vindictive, I swear, but kid... I don't think you should post a fic unless you have at least SOME basic comprehension of thigs like GRAMMER, PARAGRAPHS, SPACING, SPELLING, ORIGINAL IDEAS... and the like. Tis is not a flame... Its...more of a hard or harsh constructive criticisim. Listen, every good writer, any type of writer (especially the bad ones.. not that I'm suggesting anything.) for that matter can improve upon themselves and can never run out of room to do so. So I'm suggesting that you do a little improving remodling(sp? See? Even I have things to work on.), remaking and rewriting and then get back to us. Please don't take this the wrong way, even though I see how you could. E-mail me if you want to discuss something with me; my e-mail should be on my profile. Anyways, I'm not trying to put you down in any way, shape or form. Thanks. Sincerely and with only the best of best wishes, _Milady17_
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