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| "FAKE in Love: Act XII, Costumes and Bait" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: Insert_Pseudonym [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2013 12:15 EDT
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There are so many things I love about this act: the mention of Harry Potter, the way Rose gets almost protective of Ryo whenever Erin is around, the scene where Dee wonders if he's just a character in someone's crime story, the halloween part which fits the current time of the year so well... Okay, all in all, I LOVED it! The little Alicia-Vones-plot was quite surprising and exciting, too. I'm looking forward to the next act. It's time that bastard gets nailed! | Title: Note
Reviewed By: AzureAcreage On: May 26, 2008 12:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just have to say, that JJ's birthday as January 23rd, is also my birthday. And thinking about how JJ acts by pouncing on people, realized I do that too. Scary Scary Scary! Anyway, I've been reading your stories and just enjoy them! Wonderful work.
| Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 23:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say it. You are my favorite yaoi author in any of the fandoms I haunt. Heck you are my favorite fanfiction author period. I feel better about Erin now that I know that he's not completely stupid. Just a bit morally relaxed. I would love to see Dee knock the sh!t out of him though. I think the Alicia/Vones angle was truly inspired. Keep it up.
| Title: Another Wonderful Fic
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 21:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lisa, once again u did it! U managed to create a FAKE work of art! ^^ I loved the Halloween idea. Them dressed as firemen...*droolz* But hey, when aren't they sexy? Also ur lemons are the best. They are so full of raw emotion. Plus Ryo in leather O.O SEXY! Never did I expect him to do that...Anyway I just love ur stories! They are always so well written. As always, the characters are very well in character. Now, now I don't hate Erin...that bad. *grins* I just hate when things come between Ryo and Dee. But it makes an interesting plot I must admit. I'm glad Ryo gave him a good piece of his mind. I also like the idea of JJ/Timothy together. They make such a cute couple! Poor Rose though. Well maybe he'll find someone one of these days. Who knows, Diana may find SOMEONE good. Well keep up the great work. I'm really looking foward to ur future work. Now I'm going to Wildwood NJ for a bit. Who knows, maybe when I come back, there will be another fic? ^^ I can dream. lol See ya around Lisa!!!
| Title: You Spoil Us
Reviewed By: BlueSimplicity [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 07:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again you have presented your loyal fans and readers with a body of fiction that is heartwarming, intriguing, fascinating, erotic and innovative. It never ceases to amaze me what a strong grasp of characterization you have. You manage to take all of our favourite characters in the FAKE family, keep them VERY MUCH IN CHARACTER (more so than anyone else I've read), and yet still take them in new and exciting directions. Never in a million years would I have picture Ryo in leather, but you did it, and it WORKED on a multitude of levels. (Hoh boy did it work.) Or the playful banter between Diana and Berkley. Or finding out a little bit more about Dee in his teen years. It was all wonderful. I also love your portrayal of Alicia Grant and her interactions with Vones. That was a nicely developed and executed plot arc. Erin is also proving to be an interesting fellow-more complex than he initially appeared. I like the tension he creates in the precinct and the way Ryo has had to reflect on things a bit more as a result of it. I also really adore Timothy. You create original characters that don't overpower the originals, and yet truly enhance the story. Nicely done. And your lemons. Yes, you write the best lemons ever. I think it's safe to say that for her lemons Grumpy Demon wins the entire internet. I read your A/N at the end with a little trepidation however - I LOVE these stories - So I'm sending vibes of creativity your way. Please write more! XOX
| Reviewed By: no one On: August 05, 2005 22:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love you!! no, i'm not weird, i just really love your stories. you write the best stories about fake i've read!! keep writing more! this story is gonna keep me entertained during my vacation!!
| Reviewed By: NME On: August 04, 2005 04:11 EDT
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Ack, it's updated! Ok, I'm going to read it right now! Just when I finished my own chapter and wanted something to read to treat myself, heh. Thanks! Oh, and I've been wading through the FAKE fandom. SO far I haven't seen anyone right the boys better than you.
| Reviewed By: paraluman19 On: August 03, 2005 06:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE THAN EXCELLENT.. AS USUAL.. ANYWAY, THIS WAS A GREAT ACT. BY THE WAY, I AM ONE OF THE FEW PEOPLE WHO LOVE ERIN.IT'S NICE TO SEE SOMEONE THAT IS AN ANNOYANCE ONCE IN A WHILE!
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