Reviewed By: bearmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this a very intruiging and well written story. I registered with this site just to leave a comment. The only thing I had trouble understanding was that the "Moon Princess" was Silk. I may have missed that somewhere, but I got it once you mentioned it in your notes. Overall, I found this story very well written and befitting Nohiro. Your use of the other characters fit and it wasn't like you just threw them in there-they had a purpose.
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