| "Broken" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: harderfasterplease [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hmm. Very sad. I didn't think that you would leave it off as you did. :[ Are you going to update this story or what?
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Reviewed By: Uchiha Hikariana On: August 31, 2007 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhh...Lemon. And Angst! I love them bothe!! Write More!!
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 13:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
im not a big fan of the kakairu pairong, but this story was really good. plz make more chapters.
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Title: Awesome!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Koi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 00:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!!!!! I loved ur writing!!!! U r sooooo evil!!!! Ok, enough back-patting, and on with the serious critisism..... U do need to to go back thru ur story and hand correct some of your gramatical errors, spell check doesn't catch everything Ya know....sry not tryin' to bring ya down or anythin'!!!! -.- (think happy thoughts) And now with the guilt trippin'!!!!! How could u be soooo evil to poor little Naruto?!?!?!?!?! And will he be restored in ur next chapter? And will Sasuke survive to help his poor mental "dobe"?!?! Will they stay in Konoha? Will Naruto finally be accepted as part of the village society? And will Sasuke be accepted as well?!?! And is Itachi really dead?!?!?! And what was with the little fantasy of Tsunade's?!?!?!?! Are Kakashi and Iruka really an item? Is Iruka still alive? Will the kitsune demon, Kyuubi, finally be sealed for good? How will the village hidden in the leaves react to the odd relationship between Naruto and Sasuke? OMG!!!!!!!! 0.0 What will happen next?!?!?!?!?! And IS Neji GAY??? (my own lil' question) Will Naruto get over his being raped? Can Sasuke bring the spark of life back to Naruto's empty eyes?!?!?!?! Is the fighting finally over? Will Konoha go back to it's former peaceful state? Will Naruto ever succeed as becoming the next Hokage? Will Naruto and Sasuke ever be together again?!?!?!?! And will Tsunade have more of her hot fantasies of Kakashi and Iruka? Sorry if I ask too many questions, but i did throughly enjoy your work!!!! Saiyonara!!! Sincerely, Koi-chan
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Reviewed By: Riley Maxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 12:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAH! IRUKA-SENSEI NOOOO!!!!! I love the story by the way, it's very well written and I hope that you continue with a third chapter or so. It's simply too good to be a two chapter story.
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Reviewed By: Wobbly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 12:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it =) keep it going ^^
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Title: Chapter 2...
Reviewed By: Choi-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 01:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
You write very well, but the "Break up with Iruka or I'll KILL HIM!" thing was... a bit much. Uhhh, I don't know. I thought a little creativity in the circumstances could work... Keep updating anyway. You do write well. =)
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Title: Broken
Reviewed By: Suzy On: August 05, 2005 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Eto, please let it be a KakaIru fic in the end as well as the beginning...maybe there was something on Kakashi's end that he was warning his lover off because of. I did like the way it was protrayed and hope that you put out a second chapter. I was amused by his coworkers unconcern for his well being...being selfsufficent is the worst sometimes, eh? and being too uptight too i guess in Iruka's case... Fun please write more
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