| "A Simple Response" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Odi et amo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 05:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Aww...so adorable. This makes my fourth good Jin/Fuu fic read due to scarcity of fanfics regarding them. The only thing is that about halfway down the story page, the letters turn bold. You might wanna correct that.
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Title: YAY!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Lady Sai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you can extend this one. It's not bad. It read more like an intor to me, but you are the author and you decide. Honestly, I think I'm beginning to see why people don't leave reviews here. It's pretty difficult to do so.
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Title: Awww
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Sweetie (logged out) On: September 02, 2005 19:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was really sweet! You should write some more chapters!!
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Reviewed By: jennlynnfs [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 23:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
My favorite character is actually Mugen, but as far as shippers go, I don't really know yet. I'm still watching the anime, so I haven't made up my mind yet. But, this was a really good fic. I think Jin and Fuu were not OOC and this plot was believable. Jin would respond with grunts and silence. :) Great work.
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Reviewed By: Sky Maiden On: August 28, 2005 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I love Jin and Fuu pairings your right there arent much of those out there. Anyway I enjoyed this fic. I agree with you 100 percent with the whole Mugen and Jin thing that will never happen.
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Reviewed By: heavyblade123 On: August 15, 2005 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is awsome i think its really good!!PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!
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Reviewed By: laurabryannan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 14:15 CDT
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Content is very sweet. True to character, and nice interplay between the three. There's some formatting problems that could use correcting, but otherwise a nice first effort. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, bless you for this one. Much as I have no problem with Yaoi, I just can't see Jin and Mugen shagging eachother senseless. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.
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Title: HuH?
Reviewed By: PRoyalAngel2004 On: August 05, 2005 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like ur writing style. It's very well-written. You even mangaged to keep Jin in character. I love it. Keep up the good work. Hope u would write another in the mere future. hehehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.^__^
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