| "Heartbreakers" Reviews/Comments [ 700 ] |
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Title: Yay! Updated!
Reviewed By: 0oStandinOuto0 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thankyou SO much for updating. I don't know how much longer I could take the wait. It was awesome! Sorry, but I was SO glad that Kikyo got her. Sorry for any Kikyo-lovers I am just a Kagome/Inuyasha fan. Great job on this chapter, well written and Miroku's seen was great. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Title: Grrr
Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: January 01, 2007 14:50 CST
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aww it cut off my review -.- well
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Title: Aaah, so many mistakes...
Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: January 01, 2007 14:49 CST
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Mistake #1: InuYasha, you fool! Why you sleep with Kikyou?! Mistake #2: You know he didn't use a condom
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 12:46 CST
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O___________________________O MIROKU HAS A DAUGHTER?!?! WTF?!?!? AAAAAH! YOU'RE PSYCHO WOMAN! PSYCHOOOOOo! *kills you*
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 23:04 CST
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lol! thats too damn funny
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 22:06 CST
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oh my god! shes his daughter?! i really hope not that would just be really weird that they went out on that one date and he kissed her and they both like eachother! and its ok that it took you so long to update just dont ket it happen again! please? love the story update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 19:57 CST
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ah, so now i reread...and wow...yeah, you were alluding the entire story to this. LMAO. i just completely missed it. wonderful thought to making this girl Miro's daughter...hopefully the mother never finds out he was planning on banging on. LOL. great story, keep it up.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 19:36 CST
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...O_O ...did miro just...wait a minute...i'm rereading. LMAO. oh man, if you did what i think you did, then i bow down to you! LMAO. oh my, oh my. miro's manwhoring as finally gotten to him, and poor kikyo (never thought i'd say that). not only did yash ruin the night for all parties involved, but completely screwed with Kikyo's brain. WOW. damn. have i mentioned that i bow down to you? hehe. keep it going, this story is great!!!
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 19:22 CST
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i hope inuyasha passed out before he had sex with kikyo... if he did i could just kill him and... did miroku really sleep with his own daughter?! please! if that really happen then he IS a sick man... anyway, hope you update soon!!! =)
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Reviewed By: xAznPurity [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it please update soon!
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Reviewed By: cookie_monster On: December 30, 2006 00:48 CST
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Look, i really like your story and all but are you going to update? 'Cause i hate it when people leave their stories half finished and it really pissed me off.
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Title: damn
Reviewed By: punkgrl717 On: November 07, 2006 09:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Son of a bitch, u had 2 make inuyahsa try 2 sleep with kikyo or acually sleep with her . i love the story but couldnt u make kikyo the tramp. if u like kikyo im sry but i absolutley hate her. kagome is so innocent at the end i guess since shes not fucking anyone like the man-whore that inuyahsa is being rite about now dont u think? But please update i cant stand 2 read half of a story then not b able 2 finish the thing, that has happened SO many times and every time i get pissed so PLEASE review
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Title: damn
Reviewed By: punkgrl717 On: November 07, 2006 09:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Son of a bitch, u had 2 make inuyahsa try 2 sleep with kikyo or acually sleep with her . i love the story but couldnt u make kikyo the tramp. if u like kikyo im sry but i absolutley hate her. kagome is so innocent at the end i guess since shes not fucking anyone like the man-whore that inuyahsa is being rite about now dont u think? But please update i cant stand 2 read half of a story then not b able 2 finish the thing, that has happened SO many times and every time i get pissed so PLEASE review
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Reviewed By: Holla_Back_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon, and I love your other stories
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Title: chap.3
Reviewed By: pup [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so nice... I like how you write it. Very... Idk, descriptive? xD
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