| "Heartbreakers" Reviews/Comments [ 700 ] |
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Reviewed By: SailorMoon90225 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really like the new chapter!! keep up the good work!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 12:14 CDT
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AMFG O.O He won't go through with it...Kaggy couldn't do it, Inu can't! >.< Or he can, depending on just how evil you are to your readers. x.x Lol. LOVED this, and Chance seemed to just be in the right place at the right time...lucky chance? ~_^
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Reviewed By: loopylion On: September 06, 2006 00:16 CDT
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Don't do it! For the love of all things sacred don't do it!!!! Kikyo and Inuyasha?! That is just so wrong. Let there be an earthquake or let her parent's show up at that moment or let Kikyo die of a heartattack!!!!!Don't let Kikyo win.
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 21:18 CDT
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very good! i like it alot. i hope you update soon i cant wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 11:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your actually gonna let him fuck kik come on don't do it cuz he is going to end up hurting her in the end and so wat if kagome lied he did to . and wat is koga gonna do to kagome . he better not rape her.but y does miroku like violet and not sango, and the only reason sango was like his mom was b/cuz he lied saying that he was shy come on i would do the same thing and he did say he came harder than he has b/4.plz update soon .
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 01:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.. Awesome story! Just started reading it and i was completely wow'd. I love the way that you have set up the story and I love how you have portrayed each character in their own special way. I can't wait to see what will happen next. I almost felt as if my own heart was breaking at the end of this last chapter and I cannot help but wonder what will happen between Inuyasha and Kikyo next!! eeee. I badly want Kags and Yasha to patch things up, te hehe. hm-- so my burning question is will Inuyasha and Kikyo follow through? I will be sitting on the edge of my seat until I find out! hahaha. Well, maybe not literally, but you get the idea! Once again, amazing work!!!!
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Title: NOOOOOOOOOO
Reviewed By: Boop On: September 04, 2006 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DOnt' DO it!!!! Don't do ITTTT!!!!!! kikyo is cool in this one and everything but its not suppose to be those two together. NOOOOOOOO, inu and kaggie, kaggie and inu!!!! i can't help flame!!!! please, let kags and inu be wit each other in the end. please....
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 01:09 CDT
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I do not usually make ultimatum's but if you have Inu stick his penis in that manipulative slut I'm going to have to stop reading this story. Oh,okay not really but I'll be real sad, please do not let Kagome get the shit end of the Kikyo stick again. She's just real insecure and who wouldn't be hurt to have some other chick come on your date and then seem them all lovey dovey. I proberly would've done something nasty like spilling a drink on her dress. I hope you do not let Inu screw her pleeeeaaaase. You just gotta make this up to Kagome some way. See Ya later, Smooches.
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Reviewed By: crystal strawberry On: September 03, 2006 23:42 CDT
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That's kind of sickening, it really is.They haven't even done anything and I already feel nauseus. I thought this was going to be an Inu/Kag story. But seriously, did it have to be Kikyo?! What the fuck is wrong with Inuyasha, it was his fauult that Kagome was going to sleep with a guy, he did spend the time ignoring her to be with Kikyo. I just hope he realizes this before he does anything with daddy's little whore. Come on to not even want to use a condom, (sigh) I do sincerely love your writing style, so I won't question your......decisions, If I throw myself down and beg,will you please not let Inuyasha go through with the act of fucking Kikyo. Oh I am begging you on my knees here.
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Reviewed By: brazen thought On: September 03, 2006 23:21 CDT
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Oh fuck no!!!! Tell me he is not going to fuck Kikyo!!! Shit , let him back out at the last moment or go impotent or something, please please please don't let him do anything with Kikyo!!!! Kowing that little bitch she's trying to get pregnant. And damn if he does do something shit then Kagome should have some fun too, I don't know maybe Kikyo's dad that would be really spiteful.
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Reviewed By: Ali K. On: September 03, 2006 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was great! I hope you update soon!
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Title: NO!!!!!!
Reviewed By: IYLuv1 On: September 03, 2006 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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It would have been a freat fanfiction, IF YOU DIDN'T HAVE INUYASHA END UP WITH KIKYOU! KIKYOU IS THE BIGGEST SKANK IN THE WORLD AND YOU PUT INUYASHA SO LOW AS TO END UP WITH HER! I'M SORRY TO SAY THIS, BUT THIS IS THE WORST STORY THAT I'VE EVER READ! I HOPE TO NEVER READ ANOTHER LIKE THIS!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 10:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet chapter! Hope he doesnt fuck kikyo, then again am sure he will. Oh, n no comdoms...if they do it I hope she doesnt get pregnant ya kno. I hate Inuyasha for doing that to poor ol' kags. Make him jealous man!! again, let him see kags or something! I cant believe he considered going out with TWO of them, then danced with kikyo the whole fucking time while kags cried. Bad inu..Bad, but sexy!lol Great chpater. Keep em coming!!^^
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 02:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This chapter was just the absolute best. I cracked up at Inuyasha putting Kagome in the back, once again she literally is taking a backseat to Kikyo(lol). I can't wait to see what you do with this disaster of a date. I'm not to happy Kagome has such a promiscuous past but hey that's what makes this even more intresting.
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Reviewed By: SangoXMiroku132 On: August 15, 2006 17:51 CDT
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>_< must - kill - violet ... update soon, okay?
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