| "Vegeta and Goku: Friendship" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: lee-lee On: May 21, 2004 12:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm liking it so far. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: Saiyana 95 On: October 28, 2003 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a good concept, but if that's a teaser it's lame. You need to try an grab your audience more. And adding Uub is just a distraction.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune On: February 07, 2003 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you said you would write if you get reviews. well they are here. where's the next part? PLEASE!?!?
be shure i'll read.
and before i forget to say, this is a really good beggining, specially because you say you won't turn it into yaoi. |
Reviewed By: Hanastai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was very well written.As always, very promising, but if only you would continue writing it.
By the way, Daniel of Lorien, I think you ought to write some LOTR fics (make sure Legolas is in it PLEASE) but if you do, try to actually finish them!
Oh, and another thing. I noticed you liked my Kenshin/Kaoru fic. Well I've kind of forsaken the name Hanastai. Now I go under the nick Ran-chan. I know this is shameless self prommotion, but I'd like you to read the fic I'm working on right now.It's kind of angsty, psychological drama.
ja ne,
Ran-chan |
Reviewed By: Hanastai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was very well written.As always, very promising, but if only you would continue writing it.
By the way, Daniel of Lorien, I think you ought to write some LOTR fics (make sure Legolas is in it PLEASE) but if you do, try to actually finish them!
Oh, and another thing. I noticed you liked my Kenshin/Kaoru fic. Well I've kind of forsaken the name Hanastai. Now I go under the nick Ran-chan. I know this is shameless self prommotion, but I'd like you to read the fic I'm working on right now.It's kind of angsty, psychological drama.
ja ne,
Ran-chan |
Reviewed By: emeraldiris On: March 16, 2002 03:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Keep up your writing! So far it is really good |
Reviewed By: Jessi On: March 03, 2002 17:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Please continue?!?!?!?!?!?!? This is realy interesting. Dont make it yaoi, Please? But you should defenatly continue. |
Reviewed By: Hetchi On: February 23, 2002 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes!!!! continue now!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: jeva On: February 17, 2002 14:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it's coming good. Please don't put male/male togehter! Yours is the kind of I wanted to read! So, please continue! |
Reviewed By: Louie On: February 15, 2002 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is a very good fic. But please dont put any youi or wjatever it is called in it?!!.I think you should deffenatly continue with the story. Please? |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear On: January 30, 2002 19:23 CST
Comment/Review:
This sounds interesting. Keep it up. |
Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2002 10:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Why can't there be more fics about Vegeta and Goku's frienship without it leading to yaoi? hmm? You should continue with this fic. I'm interested in what will happens next. Oh and make the next chapter long, please. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2002 22:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's starting out nice. If you write more I'll read. |
