| "School Boyfriend" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: InuKagz_luver [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 13:13 CDT
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Hey I love your fanfic you should keep writing I want to find out what happens next
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Reviewed By: kagome95323 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 05:23 CDT
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thank u. (to hanyou_swimmer) although she wont listen to me when i tell her that..... and im her best friend! great job so far, s-chan! UPDATEUPDATEUPDATE! grrrrr! lol. luv always, e-chan!
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Reviewed By: Miroku's Sango On: September 20, 2005 20:39 CDT
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Love your story! updaye soon!
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Reviewed By: Miroku's Sango On: September 17, 2005 13:33 CDT
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I LOVE it!!!!! Write more SOON!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hanyou_swimmer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 03:23 CDT
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i really did enjoy your story, and i think you have a wonderful polt going, so please don't take this as a flame, its constructive critism, ok? try breaking your chapters down into smaller paragraphs, it will help the readers while they are reading it, also use the spell crecker, and of you don't have one (i don't, so believe me i know how frustrating it can be) then have someone proof it for you. also try expanding your chapters, show the story happening instead of telling it. believe me i am definitely not the greatest writer in the world and in a lot of things, i really suck (especialy using capital letters, hehehe) but if you need a beta, email me at hanyou_swimmer@sailormoon.com, like i said before, you have a very interesting story and i can't wait to read the next chapter! ~*~Hanyou_swimmer
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Reviewed By: kagome95323 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 10:02 CDT
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' i didnt come in here i didnt see anything' god gurl u crack me up heehee im cracking up and rolling on the floor lol r&r my story k? see ya at school! ya #1 BFF for LIFE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 20:41 CDT
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i am mostly on at 8 or before that and i really hope you write more chapters real soon
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Title: First Reviewer
Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i loved your story. i hope you write more chapters real soon. oh and please R&R my story moonlight eyes. my name is Nyah i am 15 and i spend most of my time on this website reading lovely stories like your. email me at krystalclearkiss@yahoo.com when you write another chapter. lata
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