| "The Silver Alchemist" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: hi
Reviewed By: anime shadow girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 09:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story was nice to read ."he's gone...and it hurts." that part was well and truthfully written. but the sentences are choppy, and if that one person is right, than shame on you for stealing a character. if that happened to me, id be furious
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Title: gRRR!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: LA LA LA!!!! On: August 12, 2005 13:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
U STOLE MY CHARCTER!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello. I stumbeled upon your story, and I would like to say that your story is very well written, for the beginning anyway lol. It's very descriptive and I would like to read more soon. Can't wait^.^~Vadkakid~
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