| "Funky Fireworks" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: CUTE!!
Reviewed By: UnHappy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha >_< i love the part when Orihime rolled down the hill with a 'WEE!!'.. haha >_< so cute!! And the part when she hugged Ichigo.. waa! I like IchigoXOrihime than other pairings! This one is really great though there are some typographical errors! Please continue writing!!!! ^_^
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Title: CUTE!!
Reviewed By: UnHappy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 23:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha >_< i love the part when Orihime rolled down the hill with a 'WEE!!'.. haha >_< so cute!! And the part when she hugged Ichigo.. waa! I like IchigoXOrihime than other pairings! This one is really great though there are some typographical errors! Please continue writing!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Gill On: September 17, 2005 04:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thoroughly enjoyed this absolutely cute fic. My favourite parts are Orihime rolling down the hill with an additional 'Weee!' to ask Ichigo one question and Ichigo blushing and stuttering. The kiss was nicely done too; short and sweet. That said, I would love to see more of your works. :)
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