| "The Mage Trio" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: tmtprologue
Reviewed By: strawberry pocky On: August 16, 2005 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is okay to read, but you need to space your words. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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Title: good job
Reviewed By: genkiangel On: August 16, 2005 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story so far is very good. It definately makes for a great story. The font that you chose however is very hard to read. The paragraphs should be organized a bit better. But overall I liked the story enough and am waiting for the next chapter. Great job!
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