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"devoured by darkness, discovered by light" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: Forlorn Essence [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 30, 2005 09:48 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
The storyline is very depressing, but I like it to say the least. I am conconcerned with your spelling and grammer errors, because they're so bad it's hard to read a lot of the sentences.
 Reviewed By: vegitoth [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 16, 2005 20:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
I suggest you work on your spelling errors. Get a Beta-Reader at least.

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