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| "The Diary of Fllay Allster" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: JesterSage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 04:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are two ways to intepret your POV's: 1) It's written from Fllay's POV. 2) You believe Fllay is nice and sweet. In any case, I would like to point out to the two others that people view things differently; obviously we will never see our own action as evil, and others, by seeing things a bit differently, may justify these so called "evil" actions or condemn "good" actions, succh as some people saying Bono is too naive. Anyway, a good job. A good writer will use good descriptions, but a mature writer will do that, plus understand the POV.
| Reviewed By: higurashi_kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I thought that was very interesting indeed. Very original and easy to read. Although I agree with Alexs, you have the characters mixed up.
| Reviewed By: ~Alexs On: August 16, 2005 12:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok Im going to say that this fanfic is written very well and that I like the ideas but I think you got Fllay and Lacus mixed up. Lacus is the one thats nice and sweet and smart and Fllay is the evil, bossy B**** and is quite dumb. I will keep reading it because don't get me wrong this fanfic is very good. I just needed to point those things out.
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