Title: Goody! Goody! Goody!
Reviewed By: Sakag [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I'm your first review! Okay. I am lovin this fic so far. The only thing, is that I am sort-of starting to get confused at some parts, cuz the writing is all mixed-up. Other than that though, the story is bangin'. Oh yeah, it would be nice if the chapters were a little longer as well. But, it's up to you cuz it's your story and if you want it to go like that it's cool. Peace out, Sakag. P.S. If you want a Beta I'd be happy to do it for you, and if you have a mailing list for this story i would like to be on it.
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