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Title: family time
Reviewed By: wolf.tun666 On: November 21, 2016 18:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story and have read it more times then I can count but
this chapter is one my favorite's and has me awing at Kagone's
family.
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Reviewed By: SelinaA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2010 16:04 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic!! It was great but i have to say if i was Kagome i would be mad at InuYasha for kissing her like that. A kiss is not big deal but he didn't have to use tongue.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2009 10:24 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice ending to a great story. The grammar improved in later chapters, or at least I didn't notice the mistakes as much. I really loved it and the only thing I am upset about is that it is now over.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2009 19:27 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found your pieces because of something someone else wrote and I am working through them. I was going to wait until I finished the entire piece before writing review but I saw a. n. asking for constructive criticism so I am writing this here so I don't forget. I have read some of your later work and I have seen improvement but it's not completely improved. Obviously from the numbers given I like the story and the creative aspects of it but the spelling and grammar need work. There were places that commas were missing that caused me to have to stop and read a couple of times to figure out what you were trying to say, and you changed verb tenses some times, and that also jarred me out of the "zone" I get into when reading. That is the reason that the overall score is an "8". I am really enjoying the originality and the fact that it isn't a plot I have seen a thousand times before. I hope you keep up the good work and try to continue to improve. I am also looking forward to finishing the piece (I am currently on Chapter 14).
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 11:21 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just finished reading it.. and i just wanted to tell you that i thought that you did great portraying the characters.. inuyasha being shy and kagome only wanting what is best for him and having complete trust in him... i think that you did great!!!! I thoroughly enjoyed this story.. i thought that it was heart warming... and ya just great job!!!
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2009 01:29 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWW HE ENDING WAS SWEET!!!!!!I LOVE THIS STORY! U R AN AWSOME WIRTER!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2009 16:57 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
1-5 was sooooooo good!!!! You are an awsome wirter!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 20:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovved this story it is one of the best I have ever read! and some points in the story were so shocking I never thought for them to happen! but I loved it and im glad I got to read it :) keep up all the great work ^_^
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Reviewed By: bert8813 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 22:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
i'm glad i found this story i loved it!!!
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Title: I have a bad habit of reviewing only at the end of a completed story...
Reviewed By: Pinkit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 07:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I can see why doggieearlover likes to have you as a beta, the ideas that spring forth from your mind are truly awe-inspiring. Having Inu/Kag come together after the accident was a new and original way to have them proclaim their love for each other. I liked it, the troubled speech only he new how to make out at first, Inu taking care of her and feeding her, that was awwww cute! I am not a Kikyo lover, truth is I hate her sometimes, she is soo ugh! But now I came across the Kikyo you envisioned and I see from a different angle now. She can also be nice and have a heart. The way you had us say goodbye to her was beautiful. All in all, I fave become a fan of your writing. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us...Hugs, Pinkit!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: iranad [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 21:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Okay, so I'm going to finish the rest of this, but I had to comment now. You have managed to do something I adore when i read fic... make me feel. I have cried so much already, and I'm sure I'll end up doing it again, or laughing out loud at something. You my dear, are a very talented writer, and I am so very grateful you shared this story with us. Thank you.
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Ender_kb [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 01:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great story. You kept the characters pretty much the same which seems to be hard for people when making InuYasha admit his feelings. I love the parts with Seshoumaru. You did a fantastic job with him. The lemons were great as well. Loved it all! Great job.
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 06:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I really enjoyed it!
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Reviewed By: DamagedTears [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 21:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whew i was so worried that i wouldn't be able to read your other works after reading this one when i couldn't find your stuff! I really loved this story and i look foreward to reading your other works!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 22:14 PDT
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wonderful story... loved it... good work... great job!
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