| "From Klutz To Supermodel..." Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm confused either Inuyasha is a really kind person or he is really lonely being in that big house by myself I would be too.He lets a person he barely know in his house to stay the night. I wish somebody would do that for me. I don;t know if I would go but you never know until you try. RIGHT!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 08:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very good story, please continue!
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Reviewed By: XYXkikyo_haterXYX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 23:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
eww! shaving cream! i guess that person already died or something right? poor fella. i just wanted to say that that was such a good one, really awsome. however, you have very short chapters! i hope you'll find time to do a long one and please update soon! i'm really pump up to know what the surprise is and how you'll work the romance thing between kag and inu-yasha! i think they're really cute together! and one more thing, i really liked that kikyo's your villain ( you can see in my name why) but i hope you'll also work a plot againts her because she's really mean to kagome! i don't mean to hurt kikyo lovers but, well, I'M A KIKYO HATER!!! what can i say???
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Reviewed By: ~~~ kazekage~~~ On: August 26, 2005 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
hi! i just read your story and it was great! i love how the way you used Kikyo as your villain becauseof her relationship with inu-yasha! i wouls really love to see more so please update soon!
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