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| "FAKE in Love: Act XIII, Another Round" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: Insert_Pseudonym [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2013 07:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
Just as lovely as the first collection of one shots :) Nice work! | Reviewed By: Demoness2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 21:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
While I love your entire series and can't get enough, I just had to make special mention of the scene that picks up immediately after the manga. Absolutely wonderful -- sexy and amazing. I love Ryo in this one especially, but you can't help love Dee for acting as he had in it, allowing Ryo to explore and then take Dee. Your hentai scenes are definitely yummy! Great work!
| Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 03:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, great. BTW that was the hottest phone sex scene I have ever read!
| Reviewed By: Ladyhawk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 09:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read a lot of FAKE fanfiction lately, but I always come back here for your stories. My favorite are this time "The Morning After" and "Third Time´s the Charm", as I always was asking myself, how it would develop after the last manga. I hope you will write someday a story, how Rose deals with this knowledge about their first night.
| Reviewed By: Jira_RD On: August 29, 2005 14:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic, it's definitely one of the best that I've read. (I'm incredibly picky too. -_-; I really wish I wasn't.) I think the first few chapters, I enjoyed the interaction between Dee/Bikky and Dee/Ted/Drake. Those were the best. Then the last two chapters definitely got pretty yum. I was definitely laughing through a lot of this, which I think made meh appier than the smut. Smut is great, but funny, original plotlines are getting hard to find, y`know? So, good job.
| Title: Beautifully Balanced
Reviewed By: BlueSimplicity [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 18:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know how you manage to keep doing this, but everytime you post an additional Act, it's something that I would never expect and it always exceeds any previous expectations you may have given your readers. This last series of one shots - WOW. Just wow. At this point, all I can say (reiterate)is how beautifully balanced your work is. So many of the scenes you present to us walk this delicate line that you navigate beautifully: Dee and Ryo at the beach, Dee's birthday. In concept, sweet scenes. But in the hands of lesser authors something that can easily turn dreadfully sappy. Yet, you infuse them with such depth, honesty and emotional wisdom that, for lack of a better term, you blow my mind. You take the characters in new directions, yet somehow always seem to remember the Dee and Ryo we were originally given and fell in love with. No one does their characterizations better than you. NO ONE. My favourite chapters in this latest posting were the ones set directly after Dee and Ryo consumate their relationship. Again, honest, endearing, passionate, and yet you manage to answer all of the questions that had lingered in my mind after I read the 7th manga. Thank you, for giving Dee such tenderness and understanding. Thank you for giving Ryo such passion, bravery and conviction. Both of those qualities are so rare and underplayed in the realm of FAKE fanfiction, which surprises me, since in the manga Dee and Ryo were nothing but. As always, please - GIVE US MORE.
| Reviewed By: Misslady(not signed in) On: August 25, 2005 01:55 EDT
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Please keep up the wonderful good work that you do. You do these characters justice with your wonderful series. They are my altime faves and I am very picky about the stories that I read but yours I read again and again. Please keep it up!!
| Reviewed By: DeeRyoFan_that's me On: August 23, 2005 18:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope this review thingie says that 10 is the best grade available? Good, ;) because that's exactly what I want to give you!... Well, I love your stories! All of them. Your style is awesome, the plots intrigueing, even if parts of it are just the typical "Dee seduces Ryo"-stuff (which is still superbly written), and even "innocent" kissing/cuddling scenes are damn hot! It always amazes me how much in character all the guys are and I just can't begin to tell you how much I love (and approve of, not that my opinion matters, but still...) your characterization of Dee! He's my favourite character and you're one of the few authors who write him just how I see him: just the right balance of sexy cheekiness and utterly endearing softness. Your portraying of Dee really makes me like your stories even more than I'd already do anyway! Special compliments also for your characterization of the precinct's guys' interactio! They're so witty and I love those little scenes when they joke around and pull each other's legs and stuff! :) In your latest act you had a wonderfully written scene between JJ and Dee and I almost feared it would end a tad bit too sappy for those two, but then you let it end with a typical JJ-glomping-Dee and Dee-shouting-at-JJ scenario - and I thought "This is really great! Really really well balanced!" And I guess that appraisal holds true for your stories in general as well, which makes it so much fun to read them. Thanks for sharing your wonderful work with us! :) |
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