| "Family Trip" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: HELLO?
Reviewed By: aisho [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 22:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
So I saw this fanfic with a really interesting summery and saw it was last updated in September of 2005. Obviously the first thing that come to my mind was "Yes, a great fanfic that is complete, yay!!! No waiting for the end to an excellent story!" Then I saw the end of chapter three...next chapter coming soon. So now I must ask, has this been abandoned or will it be updated before an entire year has past? I was just wondering if I should bother to hope. Thanks.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Inuyasha1026 On: September 18, 2005 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
its nice very funny and hope you post sooner k...
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Reviewed By: tenshi kara tengoku On: September 18, 2005 03:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE THE REST OF THE FANFIC!!!??IT IS GREAT!
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Title: grammar, grammar, grammar
Reviewed By: Inubutterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Comment/Review:
I have this personal rule about not reading stories that have a lot of grammar mistakes in a short section of writting. They are like finger nails on a chalk board to me. Have someone else edit your story and repost it. It's hard to enjoy something while being distracted by errors.
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Title: Family trip
Reviewed By: Priscilla V On: September 02, 2005 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the beginging of your story. The second chaptor is really funny! Update soon! Looking forward to read more and see what happens! Miroku:Hmmmmm, I wonder what Inuyasha and Kagome are going to do while the Grandpa, Mom and Souta are gone...hahahaha *Gets slap from Sango* XD
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 09:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update ASAP!!!! i like the story so far so please update ^_^
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Title: family trip
Reviewed By: lunar - moonshine On: August 23, 2005 10:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello Lunar, your fanfic was really good? You have to finish it I can't wait till you finish the story.(more romance please.) love selina
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Reviewed By: bk On: August 23, 2005 09:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great beginning. I think this is a wonderful story and I hope you continue writing. I know how boring it gets in the car on these trips and I can just imagine the trouble about to come about after a little while in the car with her family. Keep up the good work I will be watching for your updates.
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