| "It Just Happened" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Shadow of the Phantom On: September 30, 2005 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, he's awake? That's great! I'm so happy for you! I really hope nothing like that will ever happen again! Congratulations! (By the way, I really like the story, too) *gives you cookies, muffins, and puppies!*
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Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI) On: September 20, 2005 04:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm glad that your friend is okay, as for the story. It was very powerful and conveyed the right emotion, I loved it. It was beautiful.
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Reviewed By: Shadow of the Phantom On: September 09, 2005 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...that's so sad....I know how you feel. My grandpa was in a coma a few years ago...But I'd rather not talk about how that turned out...Good luck getting through this! I hope Derek's okay.
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Reviewed By: Lil goth Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 04:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story :)
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Reviewed By: Sarahfreak On: August 24, 2005 07:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sobs*
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 05:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
The stroy is very sad. I will add my prayers to yours for your friends recovery.
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