| "AU - Roy Mustang: Sex Ed Teacher" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: LuckieDuckie On: March 07, 2007 02:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry about the first review, that was actually meant for the fic before yours...>_> the link sort of messed up for some reason. YOUR fic was quite hilarious. After getting over the initial shock of Roy having sex with Ed in the middle of a classroom, I couldn't help but chuckle. I also like how you repeated the class sessions, making the reader feel as though tey are in on the joke. Good job!
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 16:44 CST
Comment/Review:
that was really HOTT!!!! it was also really funny. good job on this fic.
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Reviewed By: dreamskat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAY!I FINISHED READING THE SECONT CHAPTER AND IT WAS H.O.T.T HOTT HOTT HOTT!I GOTTA ADD YOU TO MY FAV. RIGHTERS!
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Reviewed By: dbc132 On: December 18, 2006 21:28 CST
Comment/Review:
ahahahaha that was hott and funny! i luv it!
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Reviewed By: dreamskat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG!H.O.T.T HOTT HOTT HOTT!I HAVENT EVEN READ THE SECONT CHAPTER YET AND I CAN'T STOP SMILEING!THIS IS ASOME!ASOME!ASOME!ASOME!
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Title: Hello!
Reviewed By: AnimeRainChildOfLove [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 16:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snorts loudly* Ahahahaha,that was cute,and very funny. I loved it.
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Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 01:52 CST
Comment/Review:
*giggle, snort.* Very funny. Very, very funny. ^^ I love Mustang.
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Captain yukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*mouth is still hanging open* now that, right there, was HOT! you did a great job and i loved every single moment of it... i even think you should write a little sequal. that would be nice, very nice if it included a nice juicy lemon...hmmmm ehhhh??? keep up the great work, it was awesome!!!! Loyal fan and captain starseeker
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Reviewed By: AnimeVamp999 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn...that's all I can say...Damn...it was still sooo funny, to think of Roy Mustang like that, lol lol lol. But I liked it, it was very entertaining...and it made me think of very sick things, lol. Buh-bye!
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Reviewed By: Lydis On: August 28, 2005 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awsome. =) (it's a smily side ways just so u know)
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Reviewed By: Curly 211 On: August 25, 2005 12:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh god! That was...different...it was good though. Just different...and a little disturbing...
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