| "Complications of Love and Humanity" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Brave [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2016 05:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This from what i think sorry about the
grammar😃 Hector: Is it Florina? Hey Florina!
Florina: Man voice? But...who? Hector: Hey Florina! I'm right here!
I wanna talk with ya!It's me Hector! Florina: What?!Hector?!.......
Huey? He did lost my concentration.... Ah,I can't control my
Huey... Aaaaaa.......!!! Hector: Oh Father Sky, Mother Earth.. Help
me..This terrible trauma..This creepy flashback...I should prepare
if my back will hurt... Florina! Please don't fall! Don't make a
creepy flashback! Florina: I'm trying Lord Hector! But... It's
really hard! Aaaaaaaah! BANG!BOOM! Hector: Good she even heavier.
Florina: Ummm... Sorry... I,i,i... Hector: You already make me got
a lot of exercise. Hmph! Florina: I.. I... I... Sniff,sniff Hector:
It's ok. Don't cry. You only make me think i am a big scary ghost
monsters. Flotina: But,but.. You... B-big Lord Hector, very big.
Hector: Hmph!
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Title: Woww good job
Reviewed By: Brave [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2016 02:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is very fun. I so much love this fanfic. It isn't boring. So
please upload the chapter 4 😃 maybe you
forget but please...
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Reviewed By: Shaihirah [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 14:34 PST
Comment/Review:
Omfg, this is a GREAT fanfic!! UPDATE!! NOWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Eliwood_L_fan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 15:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS AN AAAAMAAAAAZING STORY!!!!LynXEliwood is my favorite couple too!The sad thing is you can never find any fanfics on them.It's always RathXLyn os EliwoodXNinian...gag me.I'm so happy someone else likes this couple too!!!Please write more!I'm awaiting eagerly!..........waiting and waiting...LOVE THIS FANFIC!!!!(i know, i'm weird-_-)
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Title: My oh my!
Reviewed By: The Infamous Wind Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2005 18:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic. I'm a Guy and Rath fangirl, so this suits me well. ^^ Keep going, it's quite rare to find FE fanfics that I like! ~Windy
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