| "We Love You Kagome" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Angeana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2010 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story! It's really enjoyable. I'm writing a fanfic a bit like this (only the ly daughter part is the same) and it really motivates me. Please write more stories too! :)
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Reviewed By: Sadie On: September 04, 2005 19:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heys!!! Great story! Please write a sequal.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
The plot is easy to figure out, but to my knowledge it hasn't been done very often which is good. You're new to writing so some spelling mistakes are natural. Honestly reading your work reminds of the first I wrote a fanfic. It is your first story so you'll improve as you go. I try not to go back and correct my work very often because I like to let people see the difference in how I use to write compared to how I write now. But if you want to correct them that's fine. And you want to try and have less mistakes in the future then I would suggest getting an editor or beta reader. I hope you update soon because I really want to read more.
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