| "Gotta Knock a Little Harder" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
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Reviewed By: elena199333 On: July 13, 2009 06:40 CDT
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Reviewed By: Ebn105 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 18:59 CDT
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This story was absolutely AMAZING!! I liked it so much, it wasn't even like i was reading a story, it was more like i was watching a movie or something. You described everyone and everything so well, and i think you did a great job with the characters. Nowhere in the story did i think, "Oh that character would never do/say that." This was an absolutely great story, and im just sorry i didn't read this any sooner. GREAT JOB!
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Reviewed By: Haywire_Hakaze [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 15:34 CDT
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I don't consider McKenna Mary-Sueish at all. She's not perfect--many flaws there... physical and mental, heheh--and only one character fell for her. Even that was gradual, not instantaneous. I'm thrilled it was Jet, too. He doesn't get the respect and love he deserves; he's a good man. Okay, so I'm crazy. But at any rate, this was a good read. The time continuum preview gave me a slight headache, but I'm getting a feeling. ^_^ Anyway, I'm going to read the sequel tomorrow if I have the chance. Right now I must get ready for work.
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Reviewed By: Haywire_Hakaze [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 17:24 CDT
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I won't bother with exclaiming praises until I read the last seven chapters, but I can say I'm glad you're in my Favourite Author list. ^_^ SEVEN CHAPTERS TO GO!! YAY!
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Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 22:14 CST
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I'm usually not much for crossovers but, I gave yours a look and I must say I am very glad I did. You did a wonderful job staying in character while making the interaction between them so interesting and flow so well. You also did a wonderful job leaving us waiting for your sequal to this story. I'm very shocked you only have 9 reviews. I have to say I feel sorry for those poor souls that look over your well written story because they write it off because its a crossover. I truly think this is one of the best Full Metal Alchemist storys I've had the pleasure of reading. I'll be on the look out for your next work.
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Title: Dragonnan
Reviewed By: dragonnan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's it, I'm gonna crumble up and die right here! Damn, you are so awesome for writing this!!! And I'm SOOOOOOOOOOOOO intrigued about what you're gonna do with the characters now!!! There is so much material to work with here you could write another TEN stories!!! I absolutely can't wait to see where you take this, I really can't! Truthfully, this was just like watching a season of the show, and now we have to wait through the re-runs till the next season of the series starts up again! LOL Well I'll be hitting my screen frequently till I see the next part start again! (this is gonna be so good!!!!!) YAY!!!!!
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Title: Dragonnan
Reviewed By: dragonnan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, this is just getting so good!! I just get tingles reading this! The characters just keep improving on the perfection with every chapter you post, and the drama and suspense is through the roof!!! I'm on the edge of my seat again and again with each new twist you add to the story, it just blows me away!! COME ON PEOPLE, COMMENT ON THIS KICK ASS STORY!!!!!!!! Sheesh, unbelieveable! This is such a masterpiece, I'm so glad I found it, it truly is a work of inspiration!!!!!
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Title: Dragonnan
Reviewed By: dragonnan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You continue to amaze me, and I'm so grateful for all your wonderful updates! I check my e-mail every day just to see if the next chapter is in or not!! I also am so impressed by how you've kept the characters so true to themselves, and oh- all the spectacular and absolutely thrilling interactions between the characters is so so... AGH, there aren't words good enough to tell how much I love every second of it!!!!! You totally rock!!!!
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Reviewed By: Fair-Juno On: September 29, 2005 06:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING!!! i'm loving evrything about this fic. i nevr would have fathomed a story like this. keep up the great writing. it has sucked me in
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Title: FFRG chapter one
Reviewed By: Kellen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 23:15 CDT
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Thanks for submitting your story to the FFRG. I'm glad I took the time to read this. Honestly, when I saw it, my first thought was "Cowboy Bebop/FMA? What?" However implausible I thought it to be, though, I really enjoyed reading the first chapter. I thought you had the characterization spot-on. Jet sounded like Jet. Spike is Spike. And Armstrong... thanks for keeping him Armstrong and not making fun of him too much. ^_^ Technically, you have a good grasp of the language. I did spot a few little grammar problems. (Here: "Can't you use an anesthetic," Jet asked. That needs a question mark instead of a period.) You might want to go through this carefully and look at your punctuation. I didn't see many problem spots, but I'm not a beta-reader, only a reviewer. ^_^ I also had an issue with your portrayal of Jet's "question" near the end of the chapter where you used "???" to portray his confusion. Instead of using that - which is more than just grammatically weak; it is frankly unacceptable - a sentence detailing the look on Jet's face would work so much better. Ie, "a look of confusion flitted across Jet's face" or something along those lines. I really enjoyed this story, and I will make a note to read the rest of it. Cheers,Kellen
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Reviewed By: SkyMaster [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, I must state that I'm not particularly fond of crossovers. That's because most of them are usually poorly written. Yet that isn't the case here at all. This story is quite simply amazing. It conveys such a unique crossing without sacrificing the things most crossovers do. Everyone is in character, the style of writing is just wonderful, and the plot itself is very interesting. The short amount of time between every update is also something I'm extremely pleased with. I will admit that it has been a while since I've seen any truly good Cowboy Bebop and Full Metal Alchemist stories here on MediaMiner. Never did I think I'd find both in one place. The word magnificent doesn't do your story justice. You've given me faith that there are good crossover fan fictions out there. For that and your great story I thank you.
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Reviewed By: Wildfiredreams On: September 14, 2005 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ very nice, this is an exceptional fic and a very unique cross over.
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Reviewed By: SStone8072 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 15:20 CDT
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Very interesting use of the cross-over technique. I really enjoyed this story. It is very detailed and well written. I am new to the fan fic community and I was wondering where I could find soe other really good Cowboy Bebop fic. Preferably somewhere with a very active community with good feedback. Thanks to whoever helps me out.
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Reviewed By: Kaitou7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 19:32 CDT
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Yo i think this story is really great i liked it a lot it is quite original and i hope to see an update soon.
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