| "A Cinderella Story" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 22:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oops! other reviewed messed up. Like I was saying you could take the greater than, less than symbols out and just write the narration in paragraph form and most people will get it. But if there is something you want to point out as Kagome's thoughts then you can put "Kagome's Point of View(POV)" at the beginning and end of that narration. Other than that and some spelling errors I liked it!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm very interested to see where this goes! I love Fairy Tale classics! But it was confusing and hard to understand at times. All the different symbols made it worse. I think with exception of the qoutes, you could take these '
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon!! i like the story so far ^_^
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