| "A Little Bit of Everything" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Aqua Aneko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a truly awesome story. I love the way you created Elizibeth and Kai is totally awesome (and very Uo-like I might add. UO ROCKS!) One point you kight want to work on though is drawing the characters away from what is going on in the mangas a bit. I've noticed that there are a lot of parallels to D.N Angel in it and although you do need to keep it resonably close it could make this story even better to having the events be your own ideas and not formed after the manga's model. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: dadadadadada On: September 18, 2005 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is so good so far i hope you update soon!!!!!!!!!!!! i just cant help but to say it is one of the best that i have read. it is in second so far so keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Kyoru Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 06:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
i'm REALLY tired right now this might just come out as a jumble, but i wwanted to review your story for you because i really liked it ^^ and i just wanted to say that i'm likin' the concept of my favorite book type book mixed with two of my absolute FAVORITE, (fruits basket being #1 of course ^^), mangas! anywho, i can't wait for the rest of your story because i really like it. PS neopets main account username is cashdogg782121; i'm sorry but i already created my own guild so i can't join yours, but i would like it very much if you'd drop me a neomail sometime even if it's just random nothingness =3
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Title: Neo name
Reviewed By: Katie_Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My neo names. taylor_Ann101. Yay....I know it has nothing to do with my name. I just like it. Anns my middle name.
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Title: Katie....
Reviewed By: Liz (aka i_rox_sox) On: September 06, 2005 17:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yo, Katie, was your neoname...is it the same??? Becuase nobody new has joined my guild xept for my lil sis....Anyhoo....wat is it? I'll send you an invite to the guild if you can't find it... ~Liz
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Title: HEH:
Reviewed By: Katie_Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg!! I have two neopets.! ^-^ I what to join the guild! Yay! I put up a story on this site. Just letting you know. I cant wait for more of your story.! :) Ta Ta!
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Title: KATIE!!!
Reviewed By: Liz (aka i_rox_sox) On: September 05, 2005 16:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG!! Katie!! Wassup?? Yes!! *holds brand-new statue up in the air* I now have a golden llama!! Score!! Thanks for reviewing!! ~Liz PS. If you like neopets, or go on the site, visit and maybe even join my guild, ~*Manga and Anime Guild*~ Silverymoon is in it too!
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Title: HELLO
Reviewed By: Katie_Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh whats up sox_roxer93. This is Dark_Angel from furuba.com !!! ^-^ cant wait for you to update soon all your storys are awesome exspecialy this one! You get a Golden Llama statue! ~Katie!! n_n
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Daisuke [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
intresting that you reviewed ur own story. Although I dont like Harry Potter. This one is excillent ^.^! Please Continue!
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Title: OOOMMMMGGG!!!
Reviewed By: Liz (aka i_rox_sox) On: September 03, 2005 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ROX MY SOX!! Please reveiw! I hope this story rox your sox too!! Also posted on http://fiction.furuba.com/stories.php?caid=3&sid=707 under sox_roxer93. ~Liz
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