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| "The Cursed One" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Dawnella [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 09:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again! Thanks for mentioning me! And this is getting more and more interesting. I like how Elyion isn't quite...er...happy. I think it may be cuz I'm reading too many MarySues ^^;;; ANYway, I don't think I will ever be able to update as fast as anyone around here. It's my first year of high school and I feel dead! @_@ Your spelling was a bit off, but it's not like I really care...It's the story I'm looking at...^.^ So please, update sooner than I do!
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Reviewed By: Dawnella [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No, this isn't JUST in reply to your review. I honestly like your story. At least, I much prefer it to my own, rather boring start. At least you got some action in there. And already I'm wondering who she really is, though I've got a clue. Yes, this fic was quite enjoyable, and I do hope you can make the next few chapters longer. Well I gotta go now, but I'll be watching this fic! Ta!
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