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| "Hakama Dake" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] | Title: Sublimely sumptuous!!
Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my. It's not all that often you come across a fic like this, so elaboratly crafted and with such painstaken attention to detail! But this, my dear, is such a fic. Even from the title- the wonderful, 'Hakama Dake', promises to be a wonderful tale. Having just read the whole of your fic in about an hour, I'm wishing I'd reviewed chapter by chapter, to give you more insight into my opinions, but Kami damn it, I couldn't wait that long to read what happened next!! ^.^ Your imagery really got me. In the ff world, so many metaphors are recycled, but yours were so original and beautiful, it is obvious how much care you take in crafting each sentence. The ebb and flow of your words is so powerful, I was pulled completely into the world of Hakama Dake. As for the plot- woah! What a better way for Kaoru and Kenshin to get it on, than the battousai see our heroine in her full glory! I really loved that moment. And amber eyed Kenshin, or Battousai, in your portrayal, is very HOT ^.^ Even you chapter titles (the one thing I destest thinking up!) are thoughtful, and of course, down right naughty!! I especially liked the connotations of 'tumbling Kaoru'. Tehee!! What else can I say? Honestly, no review I could give would justify how much I fully enjoyed this fic. It is, hands down, the best fic I have encountered in the whole Rurouni Kenshin fandom. I bow down at your skill and writing talent. Kudos, and keep up the great work! (sorry if my spelling's gone to pot, my eyes are rather sore at racing through your amazing fic!!)
| Reviewed By: Maka Kimimela On: July 21, 2007 02:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let me just say, this fic was a great inspiration to me. I actually posted a couple fics on FF.net because of your story. It was fantastic! The detail was staggering, and when you explained Kenshin's desire for Kaoru when she was wearing "hakama dake," I was stunned! I almost considered becoming a lesbian...lol. This fic was everything a fanfiction should be. This story is by far one of my favorites, and should most definitely be awarded. The way you explained their body movements was so natural...It made me jealous that I didn't write it. I love this story, your other fics, and your betas for their genius as well. I want you to write for the rest of your life, because you are one hell of a wordsmith. And mentioning the dust in the sunlight was brilliance in its truest form. Again, congratulations on your superb talent and the expressing thereof. Beautiful story written with beautiful words...this is a 10! -Maka Kimimela
| Reviewed By: MidnightSilver On: January 24, 2007 06:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is by far one of my favourite stories - sexy, but not slutty, just romantic! I like that kaoru is shown here in strength (so many damsel in distress fic's - bloody hell what did people think she did before Kenshin came along!)After all she is fabulous - only weakness being Kenshin of course (sigh)! A million praises - I'd love to write a fic of my own....if you have any secrets you'd care to share (like how to stop reading other people's fab fanfic's and get my but into gear...) please share with Midnightsilver@yahoo.com... (could use the advise...my attempts tend to ramble off into tangents ):)Congrates and thank you!!!
| Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw what a sweet story. Not enough naughtiness for my taste, but adorable nontheless. I thought you captured them and their rampaging emotions perfectly. You're a great writer and this was a fabulous story. Thanks so much, you had me hooked!
| Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 15:41 CDT
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amazing *clap clap*
| Title: Lizzie Welling
Reviewed By: Lizzie Welling [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved it! The only downside was when it ended. Wonderful work, and if you do ever decide to continue it, please let me know!
| Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf (nsi) On: April 10, 2006 09:02 CDT
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Beautiful dear, what a glorious ending.
| Reviewed By: Charm16 On: March 27, 2006 15:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story you have here! I'm so excited to see what would happen next. Please update soon!
| Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 17:33 CST
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I ABSOLUTELY adore this story. I've been waiting forEVER for you to update, and you finally did! YEAH!! Everytime I come across this, I have to go back and reread it from the very beginning, just because I love reading it. I really can't gush enough about it. Plus it's RuroKen! I mean what's not to love about Kaoru and Kenshin (especially when he slips into Battousai mode :P ) Anwyho, pls update really soon, I can't wait to see what Battousai, I mean Kenshin's, got next for Kaoru!!
| Reviewed By: nutterbutter On: December 07, 2005 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This really is the best fanfic I've ever read, in any genre. I love how descriptive and emotionally charged your writing is, and the characters seem so real. I also really like your sense of humor - Kaoru's inner monologue is constantly sending me into fits of laughter. I look forward to reading more of this story :) Also, where can I read your new one, Liquid Flame?
| Title: Very Good
Reviewed By: milady17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 16:27 CST
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I usually don't review pieces, but I like this one! This is very good. It's funny and at the same time it's sexy. Very good job! I expect to see more from you!!!
| Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 18:28 CST
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Ok, your story is really HOT!! Whew! I totally love the sexual tension that's between Kaoru and Kenshin, and throwing a little Sano in isn't all that bad either! Anywho, GREAT story and I'm anxiously awaiting your next chapter. However, I have some bad news for you. I completely understand your love of Vin Diesel (who wouldn't), but as a heads up, the guy swings for the other side.... Let me tell you, I couldn't have been more surprised (and just a little disappointed), but hey, to each his own. But it means us girls are left in the dust!! Not FAIR!! (It's ALWAYS the cute ones who end up being gay!)
| Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2005 18:41 CST
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This is great. I love everything. It's about time they got to it. Later.
| Title: Omg
Reviewed By: lone saiyan woman(not signed in) On: October 27, 2005 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have just recently got in to rurouni kenshin, i went to an anime fest is london and bought the manga i instantly fell in love with it and i downloaded some esps not as good as the manga but still good enough and this is the 1st fanfic im reading of rurouni kenshin and all i can say is that You are amzing your launguage is beautiful and u make me want to search for more beautifully written fics like these...please update soon becasue i am afraid i will not encounter such artitic piece of literature in this section its rare to come by in the dbz section i jus beg everybody could write like you including myself
| Reviewed By: Yoko Oro [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 13:43 CDT
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One thing I've noticed is that you portray human nature very well. Even if you truly love only one person, after a "sensual awakening", the mind tends to wander and listen to your glands. That's why I don't think you went too far with the Sano thing. I wonder how Sano's chat with Kenshin will impact his and Kaoru's relationship? Well, it was good advice for the readers, at the very least. And I don't think he was being a hypocrite. He wasn't being "holier than thou", he just cares about his friends. Keep up the good work! I know you wi~ll!
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