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| "Digimon-Destined" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Reviewed By: Aiko Namika [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm rather enjoying this story. ^_^ The variations on the different Digimon-Destined are well thought out, as well as the fact that their Digimon forms are obviously based on their partners, but with a modicum of their own flavor added to the mix. Igorimon is a nicely-balanced character, and while I was sad that she died, I was also pleased in a way. That is, the writer and role-player in me is pleased, because it's never any fun to have a character that is so much more powerful than you running around taking care of your enemies for you. *grin* I also liked Frankenmon, and how he truly believed that he was doing what was best for the Digimon-Destined, to save their lives. In fact, throughout all of this, I've only got one comment about something you should fix: Angewoman is not a Champion Digimon. She's an Ultimate. Gatomon's a Champion, which a lot of people forget. Her Rookie stage is Plotmon (I believe), a little puppy-like Digimon. Gatomon digivolved to Champion on her own in Myotismon's service, as she had to fight all the time there, and thus was forced to become more powerful, or die. While it doesn't seem that this story will ever be finished, I just wanted to express my enjoyment of what you had wrtten. You did a very good job, and I thank you for that.
| Reviewed By: Fan-Fic dude On: July 18, 2004 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Neep! First off, great story! wonderfulo creativity and origionality. The plot was very well thought-out as well. I do have some suggestions, how ever. Next time you write a story, you might want to put in a few things concerning the other members of the group (Example: things like more of the digi-gang being turned into their "complete form"), btu do it useing less words in certain places (Example: discribeing how characters look: good. Using all of those words during the scenes where the group was just goofing off, like the food fight,: bad.). But other then that, I greatly injoyed the story and hope you can come up with more like it (like do a fan-fic like this with other animecatigories like Pokemon or Yu-Gi-Oh.). I would REALY like to read that!
| Reviewed By: Cave Cat On: May 02, 2004 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story! Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: Alan Wilkinson On: November 19, 2003 09:34 CST
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Note to self. Spell surname correctly. Oy
| Reviewed By: Alan Ailkinson On: November 19, 2003 09:33 CST
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Interesting story so far. What site are the other two reviwers talking about?
| Reviewed By: Mastero [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 15:26 CDT
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Cool fic! Maybe after you finish this fic you could make one for the 02 kids. Maybe Arukinimon (sp?) merge ten Dark Towers (Control Spires) into another Frankenmon or something. and if the 02 kids became digimon they might be able to Jogress Evolve (DNA Digivolve) together and stuff like that. I noticed you had the pics Daisuke\Davis and Iori\Cody on your site so all you'd need is a Miyako\Yolei and a Ken pic and maybe 02 pics of Hikari\Kari and Takeru\TK. | Reviewed By: stwpa2002 On: May 22, 2002 12:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this for a couple of months here and on NeeP's site and its the best fanfic, no story ever. |
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