| "Snowfall In July" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: yanagi_chyan On: March 13, 2005 09:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi there!! hee hee.. though u alerted the mushy alert, I was really glad that to see that though it was mushy, Fuuko and Mi-chan was just a bit OOc. Great job!!! Loved the fic, loved the part where Mi-chan made the snowstorm ( hee hee) and loved the whole thing!! Write more!
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Title: Fuuko
Reviewed By: KiriFuuko On: March 14, 2004 02:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I think this fic is very nice. Keep goi'n OK!!!
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Title: so good
Reviewed By: animelove [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 23:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i had not read a tokiya& fuuko fic this good in ages! i love this story...
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Title: xP
Reviewed By: Bulletproof Monk On: November 08, 2003 21:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Tokiya-kun was completely out of character. He so would not attempt suicide over Fuuko-chan. And "sea monkey" is Recca-kun's nickname, not Fuuko-chan's. The story was too technical, and sounds too much like you just wanted to tell the information without making it enjoyable and interesting. But I love mushy romance (though I'm not a Tokiya-kun + Fuuko-chan fan, either). :-P
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Reviewed By: Koganei Kaoru's Girl On: August 08, 2002 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm such a harsh grader... :-D ... It's so sad that Raiha died... and so stupid that Tokiya attempts suicide and develops depression over a girl... I doubt he'd actually take up acting, either... But I'm totally into romance, though I'm not a fan of Fuko+Tokiya. I'm glad that Recca and Yanagi get married...^-^.. |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: November 01, 2001 10:38 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this fic, you've captured Fuuko very well, but I think Mikagami is acting out of character. I cannot picture him doing what he did... |
