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"FAKE in Love: Act XIV, Family and Forgiveness" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ]
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 Reviewed By: TRF  On: September 24, 2005 20:03 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
You only got four last ime?! Damn that's depressing. Por little demon. ;D But this one was really good. Loved the sister angle, even if I did want to beat the twits head in.
 Reviewed By: Kalissa [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 23, 2005 02:32 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I LOVE your work! I've read every fic in the series and I can't wait for your next update. You're a genius and I bow to your talent. Please update soon! ^_^ Thanks for a great read. Your fanfics are fantastic!
 Title: Demoness
Reviewed By: Demoness2005 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 22, 2005 21:49 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It's about time I start reviewing this series. I LOVE IT!!!!! I love your characterizations of Dee and Ryo, especially Ryo! They are much like how I see them from the manga. Thank you, thank you, thank you for plenty of quality, enjoyable reading! Please keep going! Or if you ever end this series, don't stop writing FAKE. You are one of my two very favorite FAKE authors and my fave out of those still writing! Please let there be an Act XV!!!!
 Title: It just gets better...
Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 21, 2005 03:50 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This Act had such great depth to it. I loved it. I still think Erin is now more of a prick than Rose ever was. You just can't teach some folks. On the subject of Rose, I would enjoy seeing him hook up with someone now that he's an honorary member of the family. I'm sure that I'll love whatever the next Act may bring. I can sympathize with your review woes. I have 61 hits on my "Spriggan" fic and not a single review.
 Title: Amazing...
Reviewed By: shadowjupiter33  On: September 20, 2005 15:59 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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All I got to say is, WOW, Grumpy... Again. First off, let me say that I am a FAN of yours. I have read all your FAKE 'Act..' stories since the very first. I have also read almost every story under the FAKE forum on Mediaminer.org and your stories have always brought life to these characters. Yours always feel more warm and heartfelt. A little bit about myself...I am 29-years-old and have been an anime fan for almost 8 years. Funny, but the very first anime I was ever exposed to was 'La Blue Girl' *snicker, snicker* and I couldn't believe what I was seeing. My friend- who had been helpful enough to pop it into the VCR for me to watch- told me, "So, what do you think?" All I could manage was, "Is there any more of this?" Ooooo, from that moment, I was hooked! Sailor Moon stole my interest, next, and I started collecting the trading cards which has grown to be worth thousands, today. (I consider it inheritance for my son) Some others I enjoy are Fushigi Yugi, Inuyasha, Boys Over Flowers...basically, shoujo. These days, I am a manga nut. Just to name a few, I enjoy reading From Far Away, Red River, Genshiken, Nodame Cantabile, Girl Got Game, Battle Royale, Battle Angel Alita (including Last Order), Alice 19th, and Genbu Kaiden. Shoujo and a little shonen. Obviously, Yu Watase is my favorite author. Coincidentially, both of us were born on the same day- March 5th! Your stories actually started my interest in yaoi. I collected the entire FAKE manga collection and fell in love with
 Reviewed By: yurathewicked [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 20, 2005 01:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
thanks for all your hard work. i look forward to each new Act! your intimate scenes make me drool @_@ and your plots are always interesting and fit well into the FAKE world. And props for the JJ/Tim romance- it's so cute!
 Reviewed By: silverwyvern  On: September 19, 2005 18:15 EDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm sooo hooked on your story. ^_^; I just read all the acts back to back. My eyes hurt now.... Anywho, such a great story! I absolutely love it. The plot is wonderful and it feels exactly like an extension of the manga. This is probably one of the best Fake fanfics I've ever read. I hope another act will be written and keep up the lovely work!!
 Reviewed By: NME  On: September 19, 2005 00:49 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh, I'm sorry, I'm not sure if I reviewed your last chapter. I agree, it's completely unfair, everyone should give an author a review at least once. Especially with a story as good as yours. You know I love your Ryo and Dee, and the way you develop your plot. Did I tell you yet that you write the best lemons? There's something so tender in the way you write the encounters, it makes me keep reading when normally I just skip. I enjoy your character of Tim, and I'm glad that JJ learned how to keep his hands to himself. Especially when he's with someone else! And I like Erin, we need someone to cause trouble for our guys but not so much trouble that he gets arrested at the end of the chapter. The ending with Claire and Dee was more realistic than most, I'm glad that instead of Dee crumpling and "doing the right thing" Claire instead learned to respect Dee's boundaries, and hopefully rekindle the relationship when Dee's ready. I have a cold relationship with my half-siblings, so at the same time I really felt for Claire. I like the part about Ryo always winning, how true. Though it's nice that Dee got to one up him on the "Dee always pick losers" exchange. Well, I'm behind on my homework. I'm sorry I didn't review your last chapter, and I'm sorry this one is so long. You're still my favorite FAKE writer!
 Reviewed By: Melanthe  On: September 18, 2005 17:25 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Having just ventured into the FAKE fandom, I am very glad I've stumbled across your In Love series (I had a bit of a marathon these past four days, reading all of your acts). You've stayed true to all of the characters and your plots are wonderfully written. Do keep writing, please. I can't wait to see more from you.
 Reviewed By: slf59 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 18, 2005 15:30 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I feel like it's Christmas when I see another installment of your Fake in Love series. Thank you for sharing these stories!
 Reviewed By: UltraEra  On: September 18, 2005 02:47 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Fabulous as always. This is by far one of my favorite FAKE fanfics. I'm always checking everyday to see if the next installment is up. Thank you so much for sharing your work!
 Reviewed By: very bad evil kitten  On: September 17, 2005 19:04 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great as always. I've read all the FAKE in Love fics, but I don't like reviewing unless I have something constructive to say... I don't have anything constructive to say, but four reviews for the last one was pitiful. Awesome series; hope you write more. Even if I don't review again, I will read and enjoy any new additions to the series.
 Reviewed By: Bec  On: September 17, 2005 13:57 EDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I know, I know, I haven't reviewed any of these, but I have to tell you, I really enjoy reading them. I was waiting for you to post this one and was excited when I saw it here. After fourteen acts you still have me hooked. Keep up the good work!
 Reviewed By: Akanah  On: September 17, 2005 09:24 EDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I've read all you FAKE in Love Acts, so this is a review for ALL of them. :-) The storylines are excellent, your writing style wonderful. I like the way you protrait the characters. I like to read more! So keep up the good work!!!
 Reviewed By: shiva14b  On: September 17, 2005 04:12 EDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
best in a while! Much as I love your stories, they seemed to be degrading a bit recently, especially the lemons. Absolutely fantastic! I eagerly await the next installment.
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