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| "FAKE in Love: Act XIV, Family and Forgiveness" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Reviewed By: Insert_Pseudonym [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2013 13:20 EDT
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Damn you get better and better! I love how you included little (and not so little) lovers' quarrels this time - I missed those a little until now ;) Besides, I'm beginning to really like Tim and JJ together. I lol'ed so hard when Tim kissed Ryo as revenge! xD Good God, Ryo certainly gets kissed by a lot of people! And Dee's jealousy was just cute. Oh and I often wondered if and how Dee will ever come into contact with his biological family. I like how you included that and I'm curious if he will stay in contact with his sister now, and if maybe they will even get close. Another great scenario was Bikky taking both Ryo and Dee to parents' day, and how all the teachers thought Dee would be a woman! Poor Dee! xD Well, I'm off to the next story. And don't forget, not all penguins are graceful on ice ;D See you! | Title: -worships you-
Reviewed By: bookworms [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 22:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
>.< You are the best!!! -worships you- I shall read every one of your fanfics... and be amazed. xDDD
| Title: An idea???
Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 04:29 EDT
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Have you ever thought about Jim/Berkley? Or vice versa? I got this great mental flash while rereading the Arc. Talk about a hot looking pair. Just a thought. As always, I think your stuff is fantastic.
| Title: snowball3
Reviewed By: whiteguineapig25 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 02:51 EDT
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I have read every one of your stories quite a few times, but I don't remember if I have every reviewed, if not well I will just say that I liked your charactrizing of every one. I just have one problem with your writing you use optimist instead of pessimist. A pessimist always execpts the worst and an optimist always thinks things will get better. I am pretty sure those are the right definition of the words. For a story idea could you write something that would explain the relastionship of Tim and JJ a little better? If I don't review again I want to say that I really like all of you stories.
| Reviewed By: GarnetKoryu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 21:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what!!!! only four?! 0.o how dissapointing... ah well, i love your work, its just fantastic, you really should think about writing professionally... oh yeah, mediaminer is being a jerk again, it doesn't like sharing your fanfics with the public, i can't reach your fics unless i look you up and then request them...(or something like that...)T.T anyway you're a superb author and if you ever decide to write professionally, i'll be one of your devoted fans... ^.^ o>.
| Title: So Late..So Sorry
Reviewed By: BlueSimplicity [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 21:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GD-Where to begin? Once again, you have left me amazed. In this latest Act you revealed even newer aspects of the personalities of the cast of FAKE, and as always, did it in a way that was enlightening, heartwarming, surprising while at the same time VERY realistic. Drake's insight into Dee's problem, Tim's feelings toward JJ, Ryo's reaction to finding out Dee had been keeping a secret from him, and finally Dee's reactions to all of the events around him. AMAZING. The characters you have created are like jewels; multi-faceted. And every time you think you've learned all there is to know about them, the light changes, and another wonderful surface is revealed. Sometimes what is revealed is wonderful (Ryo's endless patience with Dee) and sometimes not so much so (Dee's insecurities about his family and upbringing.) In the end however, what you have created are wonderful rich personas that are so unbelievably human it's sometimes hard to remember you are just reading a story. Also, your dialogue in this last one was some of your strongest ever. Your characters have such a well developed banter between them - Realistic, light hearted at times, and even their fights read like real fights. Your portrayal of an angered Ryo manages to capture that perfectly, while never reducing him to the "bitchy, whiney uke" so many others are guilty of. Bikky and Dee fight like brothers, and Dee always remains Dee. Cocky, brash, but still, uniquely Dee. Once again, perfection encapsulated.
| Reviewed By: TRF On: September 24, 2005 20:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You only got four last ime?! Damn that's depressing. Por little demon. ;D But this one was really good. Loved the sister angle, even if I did want to beat the twits head in.
| Reviewed By: Kalissa [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 02:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE your work! I've read every fic in the series and I can't wait for your next update. You're a genius and I bow to your talent. Please update soon! ^_^ Thanks for a great read. Your fanfics are fantastic!
| Title: Demoness
Reviewed By: Demoness2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 21:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's about time I start reviewing this series. I LOVE IT!!!!! I love your characterizations of Dee and Ryo, especially Ryo! They are much like how I see them from the manga. Thank you, thank you, thank you for plenty of quality, enjoyable reading! Please keep going! Or if you ever end this series, don't stop writing FAKE. You are one of my two very favorite FAKE authors and my fave out of those still writing! Please let there be an Act XV!!!!
| Title: It just gets better...
Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 03:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Act had such great depth to it. I loved it. I still think Erin is now more of a prick than Rose ever was. You just can't teach some folks. On the subject of Rose, I would enjoy seeing him hook up with someone now that he's an honorary member of the family. I'm sure that I'll love whatever the next Act may bring. I can sympathize with your review woes. I have 61 hits on my "Spriggan" fic and not a single review.
| Title: Amazing...
Reviewed By: shadowjupiter33 On: September 20, 2005 15:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I got to say is, WOW, Grumpy... Again. First off, let me say that I am a FAN of yours. I have read all your FAKE 'Act..' stories since the very first. I have also read almost every story under the FAKE forum on Mediaminer.org and your stories have always brought life to these characters. Yours always feel more warm and heartfelt. A little bit about myself...I am 29-years-old and have been an anime fan for almost 8 years. Funny, but the very first anime I was ever exposed to was 'La Blue Girl' *snicker, snicker* and I couldn't believe what I was seeing. My friend- who had been helpful enough to pop it into the VCR for me to watch- told me, "So, what do you think?" All I could manage was, "Is there any more of this?" Ooooo, from that moment, I was hooked! Sailor Moon stole my interest, next, and I started collecting the trading cards which has grown to be worth thousands, today. (I consider it inheritance for my son) Some others I enjoy are Fushigi Yugi, Inuyasha, Boys Over Flowers...basically, shoujo. These days, I am a manga nut. Just to name a few, I enjoy reading From Far Away, Red River, Genshiken, Nodame Cantabile, Girl Got Game, Battle Royale, Battle Angel Alita (including Last Order), Alice 19th, and Genbu Kaiden. Shoujo and a little shonen. Obviously, Yu Watase is my favorite author. Coincidentially, both of us were born on the same day- March 5th! Your stories actually started my interest in yaoi. I collected the entire FAKE manga collection and fell in love with
| Reviewed By: yurathewicked [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 01:46 EDT
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thanks for all your hard work. i look forward to each new Act! your intimate scenes make me drool @_@ and your plots are always interesting and fit well into the FAKE world. And props for the JJ/Tim romance- it's so cute!
| Reviewed By: silverwyvern On: September 19, 2005 18:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm sooo hooked on your story. ^_^; I just read all the acts back to back. My eyes hurt now.... Anywho, such a great story! I absolutely love it. The plot is wonderful and it feels exactly like an extension of the manga. This is probably one of the best Fake fanfics I've ever read. I hope another act will be written and keep up the lovely work!!
| Reviewed By: NME On: September 19, 2005 00:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I'm sorry, I'm not sure if I reviewed your last chapter. I agree, it's completely unfair, everyone should give an author a review at least once. Especially with a story as good as yours. You know I love your Ryo and Dee, and the way you develop your plot. Did I tell you yet that you write the best lemons? There's something so tender in the way you write the encounters, it makes me keep reading when normally I just skip. I enjoy your character of Tim, and I'm glad that JJ learned how to keep his hands to himself. Especially when he's with someone else! And I like Erin, we need someone to cause trouble for our guys but not so much trouble that he gets arrested at the end of the chapter. The ending with Claire and Dee was more realistic than most, I'm glad that instead of Dee crumpling and "doing the right thing" Claire instead learned to respect Dee's boundaries, and hopefully rekindle the relationship when Dee's ready. I have a cold relationship with my half-siblings, so at the same time I really felt for Claire. I like the part about Ryo always winning, how true. Though it's nice that Dee got to one up him on the "Dee always pick losers" exchange. Well, I'm behind on my homework. I'm sorry I didn't review your last chapter, and I'm sorry this one is so long. You're still my favorite FAKE writer!
| Reviewed By: Melanthe On: September 18, 2005 17:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Having just ventured into the FAKE fandom, I am very glad I've stumbled across your In Love series (I had a bit of a marathon these past four days, reading all of your acts). You've stayed true to all of the characters and your plots are wonderfully written. Do keep writing, please. I can't wait to see more from you.
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