| "Soak Up The Sun" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: hackneyqueenextreme [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. Please add another chapter. This is a great story. MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Magical_Stan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
There's some definite OOC here... And more time spent on what they're wearing then detail on the plot.
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Reviewed By: sugar high water uma [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 19:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE and PLEASE make me beat up kuwabara.. PLEASE- Lacy PSthe ending of my email was, make kuwabara get dumped by yukina and then make a ugly girl come up and start bugging him into being her boyfriend then with you telepatheic powers control him and make him kiss the ugly girl then free him of you mind control, and have me video tape it. ROFLMAO.
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