| "The Real Reason" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: RamenLuver88 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hay Your story was too cute! i loved the reason for making her run home. Great story and if you could continue to write InuYasha stories.Ooops i already reviewed you story oh well i had to re-read it man i have short term memory T_T. thanks Leki
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Reviewed By: RamenLuver88 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI! I REALLY ENJOYED YOUR STORY.I LIKED THE IDEA YOU HAD ABOUT KIKYO. I HOPE YOU CONTINUE TO WRITE INUYASHA STORYS BECAUSE YOU ARE GOOD AT IT. THANKS FOR A GREAT STORY.
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Title: Hi Again!
Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 09:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey its been awhile! Remember me? You reviewed my first story 'Waltz' and now you have your own story so i can review it! Your reviews made me write three other stories. Anyway, you're right, I've never seen this plot anywhere before and it is really good. Short, sweet and to the point; my favourite kind of one-shot. I hope you'll write more. So, maybe I'll talk to you later. Bye-bye for now!
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Reviewed By: im me who are you? On: September 27, 2005 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, I must say that it was a sruprising reason for him to go to Kikyo for THAT reason, but there wasn't enough details in it, and there weren't enough spaces between the paragraphs, and it can get confusing to read. but other then that it was pretty good. keep trying, you'll get it. ^^
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