Title: Err...
Reviewed By: PeachLove [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the storyline, but...you really need to show some desciprtion in there. It read like a script to a play, which is fine, but this should be novel style. This being so, One sentence paragraphs aren't going to cut it. (I really like the story, though. I hope that you update...)
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